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Concrete Walls

CONCRETE WALLS The darkness crashes down all around, Like concrete walls that keep you bound. I've heard we're a nation of pill poppers these days, And that psychotherapy is all the rage. I wonder if those who say such things Know what it's like when your heart no longer sings. And the darkness crashes down all around, Like concrete walls that keep you bound. You hear a moaning, groaning sound That seems to to be coming from underground, But then you realize with a start That sound is coming from within your own heart. And you long for a pill, a shrink, a drink, Something to keep you from going over the brink. A prayer to God to hear your cry, To give you wings and let you fly. At times you see a ray of light, And wonder could this be the end of the night? So you crawl across the prison floor Where you saw the light just a moment before. But darkness crashes down all around Like concrete walls that keep you bound. Wounded Healer Submitted 8/23/09 Written 8/31/08

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Date: 12/22/2009 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Charles. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 8:58:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:11:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 11/18/2009 11:31:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/16/2009 11:47:00 AM
Congrats on feature poem this week! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:48:00 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 11/16/2009 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2009 10:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 11/15/2009 6:25:00 PM
Sad reality for far too many. I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/24/2009 4:22:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid poetry with us today Charles. Wishing you the best always in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2009 12:39:00 PM
Interesting title--an asset for any poem. Much for the reader to think about here. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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