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Concrete Mixer

cem                                        C O N C R E T E                                               
                   ent mixer                             M O B I L E      M I X I N G
                  truck is used                         for  c a r r y i n g  r e a d y
               mixed concrete... for               laying              foundations of
             buildings or drive ways even...... roads...         you  have  to re
           member  they can carry  tons...    it  makes        life easy if it is a
          big build... the builders love it........it saves them     time and  time
        cost money    don't laugh..... for it is not funny    they need loads ||
        to   take   home  to  honey.......the  love  of  their   lives........their ||
      darling wives... some builders are..........not married...... the young...|
      they live their lives to the full........................drinking and dancing and
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          making  l o v e. well                                what you'd do when
         y o u  were  a  p u p                               lived   life  to  the  full
            a n d   s up pe d                                   every    cup.   they
               h    a    v   e                                          the  best  time
                   making                                                    l o v e
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Something Concrete poetry contest sponsored by Maureen McGreavy
24th March 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/5/2018 2:45:00 PM
Nicely done, Mick. Congratulations on your fine win!:-)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/6/2018 1:33:00 AM
Many thanks, Edward, appreciated. Mick
Date: 5/5/2018 3:09:00 AM
Congratulations, Mick on your win.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/5/2018 7:28:00 AM
Many thanks, Subimal. Mick
Date: 5/4/2018 9:12:00 PM
A fun poem, Mick. Congrats on your win.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/5/2018 7:26:00 AM
Many thanks, Line. Mick
Date: 5/4/2018 12:48:00 PM
Goodness! So creative! Congratulations on your win with this outstanding presentation of a concrete poem.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/5/2018 7:26:00 AM
Just love mixing words, thanks, Susan. Mick
Date: 5/4/2018 10:27:00 AM
Lots of work creating this concrete mixer, Mick! A Concrete about concrete! Very original. Congratulations on your win! Sandra :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/4/2018 4:57:00 PM
Many thanks, Sandra
Date: 5/4/2018 7:11:00 AM
Well-done, Mick and congrats on your fine placement. :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/4/2018 4:53:00 PM
Many thanks MF. Mick
Date: 5/4/2018 6:05:00 AM
Ha! I had no idea who this was. Fabulous Mick! Congratulations on your win in my contest. (more of the social "mixer" theme would definitely have topped my podium ;) xomo!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/4/2018 4:53:00 PM
Like me you love mixing words LOL, thanks on all counts Maureen. Mick
Date: 3/25/2018 12:26:00 AM
A ' Solid ' entry Mick, good luck. Tom
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/25/2018 1:29:00 AM
Concrete comment, thanks Tom... Mick
Date: 3/24/2018 5:15:00 PM
BRAVO Mick , really made me smile and i love the shape you created, a winner for sure!:-) hugs jan xx
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/25/2018 1:28:00 AM
Cheers Jan, loved yours too... hugs Mick

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