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cem C O N C R E T E ent mixer M O B I L E M I X I N G truck is used for c a r r y i n g r e a d y mixed concrete... for laying foundations of buildings or drive ways even...... roads... you have to re member they can carry tons... it makes life easy if it is a big build... the builders love it........it saves them time and time cost money don't laugh..... for it is not funny they need loads || to take home to honey.......the love of their lives........their || darling wives... some builders are..........not married...... the young...| they live their lives to the full........................drinking and dancing and |--------------------------------------------------------------------------------| making l o v e. well what you'd do when y o u were a p u p lived life to the full a n d s up pe d every cup. they h a v e the best time making l o v e ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Something Concrete poetry contest sponsored by Maureen McGreavy 24th March 2018

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Date: 5/5/2018 2:45:00 PM
Nicely done, Mick. Congratulations on your fine win!:-)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/6/2018 1:33:00 AM
Many thanks, Edward, appreciated. Mick
Date: 5/5/2018 3:09:00 AM
Congratulations, Mick on your win.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/5/2018 7:28:00 AM
Many thanks, Subimal. Mick
Date: 5/4/2018 9:12:00 PM
A fun poem, Mick. Congrats on your win.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/5/2018 7:26:00 AM
Many thanks, Line. Mick
Date: 5/4/2018 12:48:00 PM
Goodness! So creative! Congratulations on your win with this outstanding presentation of a concrete poem.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/5/2018 7:26:00 AM
Just love mixing words, thanks, Susan. Mick
Date: 5/4/2018 10:27:00 AM
Lots of work creating this concrete mixer, Mick! A Concrete about concrete! Very original. Congratulations on your win! Sandra :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/4/2018 4:57:00 PM
Many thanks, Sandra
Date: 5/4/2018 7:11:00 AM
Well-done, Mick and congrats on your fine placement. :)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/4/2018 4:53:00 PM
Many thanks MF. Mick
Date: 5/4/2018 6:05:00 AM
Ha! I had no idea who this was. Fabulous Mick! Congratulations on your win in my contest. (more of the social "mixer" theme would definitely have topped my podium ;) xomo!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 5/4/2018 4:53:00 PM
Like me you love mixing words LOL, thanks on all counts Maureen. Mick
Date: 3/25/2018 12:26:00 AM
A ' Solid ' entry Mick, good luck. Tom
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/25/2018 1:29:00 AM
Concrete comment, thanks Tom... Mick
Date: 3/24/2018 5:15:00 PM
BRAVO Mick , really made me smile and i love the shape you created, a winner for sure!:-) hugs jan xx
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/25/2018 1:28:00 AM
Cheers Jan, loved yours too... hugs Mick

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