Concrete Mixer

cem                                        C O N C R E T E                                               
                   ent mixer                             M O B I L E      M I X I N G
                  truck is used                         for  c a r r y i n g  r e a d y
               mixed concrete... for               laying              foundations of
             buildings or drive ways even...... roads...         you  have  to re
           member  they can carry  tons...    it  makes        life easy if it is a
          big build... the builders love it........it saves them     time and  time
        cost money    don't laugh..... for it is not funny    they need loads ||
        to   take   home  to  honey.......the  love  of  their   lives........their ||
      darling wives... some builders are..........not married...... the young...|
      they live their lives to the full........................drinking and dancing and
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          making  l o v e. well                                what you'd do when
         y o u  were  a  p u p                               lived   life  to  the  full
            a n d   s up pe d                                   every    cup.   they
               h    a    v   e                                          the  best  time
                   making                                                    l o v e
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Something Concrete poetry contest sponsored by Maureen McGreavy
24th March 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ibeh Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 2:45 PM
Nicely done, Mick. Congratulations on your fine win!:-)
Talbot Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Many thanks, Edward, appreciated. Mick
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 3:09 AM
Congratulations, Mick on your win.
Talbot Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 7:28 AM
Many thanks, Subimal. Mick
Gauthier Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 9:12 PM
A fun poem, Mick. Congrats on your win.
Talbot Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Many thanks, Line. Mick
Gentry Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 12:48 PM
Goodness! So creative! Congratulations on your win with this outstanding presentation of a concrete poem.
Talbot Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 7:26 AM
Just love mixing words, thanks, Susan. Mick
Haight Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Lots of work creating this concrete mixer, Mick! A Concrete about concrete! Very original. Congratulations on your win! Sandra :)
Talbot Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 4:57 PM
Many thanks, Sandra
Flower Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 7:11 AM
Well-done, Mick and congrats on your fine placement. :)
Talbot Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Many thanks MF. Mick
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May 4, 2018 at 6:05 AM
Ha! I had no idea who this was. Fabulous Mick! Congratulations on your win in my contest. (more of the social "mixer" theme would definitely have topped my podium ;) xomo!
Talbot Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 4:53 PM
Like me you love mixing words LOL, thanks on all counts Maureen. Mick
Cunningham Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 12:26 AM
A ' Solid ' entry Mick, good luck. Tom
Talbot Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 1:29 AM
Concrete comment, thanks Tom... Mick
Allison Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 5:15 PM
BRAVO Mick , really made me smile and i love the shape you created, a winner for sure!:-) hugs jan xx
Talbot Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 1:28 AM
Cheers Jan, loved yours too... hugs Mick
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