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O I am so sad now that she left for up above. Twenty years is a long time to love a cat, this sweet. A kitten came that fit my hand all fluffy and purring, she loved to cuddle all the long nights. I held her in my arms till her body was stone. And now I go to the place where I buried my beauty. I told my friends- no, no, more cats for this here girl. They say just give it time! Oh, oh my- days are empty, sometimes, I hear her soft meow call, calling for me, and that breaks my heart. Tears, now fall fall fall like rain on my new wee cat. ______________________________ August 23, 2018 - Repost Poetry/Concrete/Concrete Cat Copyright Protected, ID 08-1307-284-23 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest Shape Up sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 11/29/20 First Place

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Date: 12/5/2020 6:39:00 AM
I have a lump in my throat, tears brimming my eyes. You got to me girl and the judge too. I'm sure. CONGRATS!
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Date: 12/7/2020 2:03:00 PM
Barbara, thanks for your compassion, I will never ever forget the day I lost my old cat, I was shattered, but found in my heart there was room to love another fur ball, thanks for the congrats _Constance
Date: 11/30/2020 12:37:00 PM
Dear Constance this is such an adorable yet heartbreaking poem and the shape is fabulous ~ how clever ~ and I send you many congrats on this wonderful win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 12/1/2020 11:51:00 AM
Anne, I will never, ever forget the day I lost my beloved old cat I was shattered, but my heart had room for another kitty by the name of Snuggles, thanks for your comment and compliment and congrats, this was a poem written with great love _Constance
Date: 11/30/2020 12:40:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... the content and the form in your awesome poetic style. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently judged contest. God bless you.
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Date: 12/1/2020 11:51:00 AM
Beata, thanks for the congrats and compliment _Constance
Date: 11/29/2020 10:22:00 PM
Constance, this is adorable and heartbreaking at the same time. So clever in your crafting this shape, it's just perfect! Going in my faves, congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 12/1/2020 11:52:00 AM
John, thanks for the visit, the compliment, congrats and FAV -Constance
Date: 11/29/2020 8:51:00 PM
So beautiful and so touching, dear Constance. I too, like you love my fur babies. I have two cats and a wee dog. They fill my life with joy. Many congrats on your win. ~ Elaine
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Date: 12/1/2020 11:53:00 AM
elaine, thank you for the compliment and congrats, for sure , pets fill our life with unconditional love _Constance
Date: 11/29/2020 6:35:00 PM
This is fantastic, Constance. Such a well deserved win. Heartbreaking about your cat. I know how much you loved all your cats from before. Congrats on the win
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Date: 12/1/2020 11:54:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment and congrats, yes I loved that old cat so much and her death shattered me at the time _Constance
Date: 11/29/2020 11:52:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it. I am delighted to see the back side of the cat. Sara
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:30:00 PM
Sara, thanks for the congrats and for the nice comment _Constance
Date: 11/29/2020 11:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on your cute win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:30:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the congratulations and the comment, this is the best shape poem I have ever done, so far anyways _Constance
Date: 11/29/2020 11:04:00 AM
Wonderfully done, Constance! Your poem brought back such wonderful memories of my childhood cat! So happy you have a "new wee cat!" Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:31:00 PM
Sam, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, my new wee cat is not so wee anymore but more like my fat cat _Constance
Date: 11/29/2020 7:45:00 AM
What a cool cat Constance! Love it’s content. Lonna
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:32:00 PM
Lonna, thanks for visiting, it was a fun shape to do although very time consuming at the time _Constance
Date: 11/29/2020 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Constance, love the cat artistry... Belle
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:32:00 PM
Belle, thanks for the congratulations and compliment _Constance
Date: 11/29/2020 5:11:00 AM
adorable cat... congratulations on your win! :) hugs
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:33:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the compliment and congratulations and HUGS _Constance
Date: 11/29/2020 5:10:00 AM
Cute cat! Quite an effort! Congrats!
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:34:00 PM
Seeker, thanks for the compliment and congrats, it was no easy thing, took hours to complete _Constance
Date: 11/25/2020 10:55:00 AM
What a tribute! Congratulations! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/27/2020 9:41:00 AM
Rico, thanks for the compliment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 11/25/2020 4:48:00 AM
Now that is awesome shape making, you did it so well..
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Date: 11/27/2020 9:42:00 AM
Silent, thanks for the compliment on my cat shape, I recall that took hours to create in 2018 _Constance
Date: 11/25/2020 4:39:00 AM
Constance, I am so sorry about the loss of your kitty. Twenty years she lived with a wonderful caretaker. Best wishes in the contest a winner in my book. Hope all is well. Charlie
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Date: 11/27/2020 9:45:00 AM
Charlie, thanks for the compassion, Smudges has left for heaven but I kept a piece of her in my heart forever, twenty years is a long time, she was my constant companion through lots a bad moments in my life and I will never forget her unconditional love _Constance
Date: 11/24/2020 4:43:00 PM
This would have taken me 20 years to type correctly! I am sorry about your kitty but this is extraordinary in every way Constance.
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Date: 11/27/2020 9:46:00 AM
Caren, I think the Lord guided my pen in this one, for creating it became my obsession, thanks for the compliment _Constance

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