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t h e skies g r e w d a r k t h i s d a y, a n x i e t y s t r e t c h e d u n d e r the blanket o f d a r k n e s s. On bended knees they all g a t h e r e d round at the bottom o f t h e c r o s s realizing what they'd done to the Son of Father. Jesus gazed at their grief and sounds of raining tears; all they could see was the blood - stained cross, they forgot that He was a gift for us all. Once more He a r o s e on the third day to be seen only to those chosen ones who spoke, ate, and drank with H i m, to receive H i m back as L o r d. After the Lord J e s u s had spoken to them, He was taken up to h e a v e n to sit at the right hand of The F a t h e r. Through H i s death and R e s u r r e c t i o n He reconciled us back to the Father. Concrete steps to our Lord. 3/28/2018 t / \ /` I ;\ /.built ;\ /a castle; \ /. In the sky \ / out of ; :\ /, ; _ _ _ __ :\ [, concrete ,] [ [ ] blocks ;] [ [ ] ;] l”l l“’l l”’l l”’l [ l”l l“’l l”’l l”’l l [ Pinnacle ;] [ [ stained ;] [ Crowns ;] [and [glass windows ;] \ - ..__. .:--- / [ \..______ ..:/ [-----------]_l”l l“’l l”’l l”’l l”l l“’l l”’l l”’l _ l”’ [ ---=---=-] [ [ ] .;] to live a life that pleases God . [ *-* ;] [ * = * .[] Centered in an entranced island of [verdant.: ] [ l l . ] green /### \ garden, hues of [ colour .: ] [ l _ l .: ]blossoms ll ll vanishing under [ glowing.: ] [ = .: ] heaven ll ll Fireplace spitted [ to life .: ] [ .: ] torch ll ll lights flicker [ reflecting ] [ __, .: ] in the ll ll tower walls as [ lace veils ] [ .: ] hang of ll ll the ceiling casting[ shadows ] [ _ .: ]------------>======== < ------ --(____ ____) ( * -- .: )----- / Prayers for // ---------------------- ~ ~ / Strength // ~`` ~ ~ .. / Peace // `` ~ .. ~ / Hope // ~ ~ 3/27/2018

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Date: 5/5/2018 2:47:00 PM
Much deserved win, Eve!:-) Congratulations. This one is stunning!
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Date: 5/5/2018 3:09:00 AM
Congratulations,Eve on your well deserved win. Great effort, great concrete.
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Date: 5/4/2018 9:10:00 PM
Wow Eve. Gorgeous piece of art and lovely poem to complement. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/4/2018 12:46:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win with this outstanding poem presentation. It is beyond words.
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Date: 5/4/2018 10:24:00 AM
Eve, back to congratulate you on your fine win! I loved your amazing work of art! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/4/2018 5:58:00 AM
These are beautiful Eve! Congratulations on a fine finish in my first ever contest! I would have placed higher but for two dates making it appear as two poems, not sure about soup rules there. Blessings! xomo
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Date: 4/19/2018 11:42:00 AM
OMG!! Beyond any imagination I have. Amazingly beautiful!
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Date: 3/27/2018 6:48:00 PM
OMG, Eve!!! One of the awesomest creation of poetry. Fantabulous job! Hugs :)
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:09:00 PM
Thank you, Akkina, I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/26/2018 10:18:00 PM
Wow, brilliant! Good luck in the contest...Mick
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:10:00 PM
Thank you, Mick, I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/26/2018 5:53:00 PM
a poetic masterpiece Eve I am in awe my friend!:-) this has GOT to be on the winners list! hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:11:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem. I'm not sure if this is what she wants ..Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/26/2018 5:03:00 PM
Eve, this is amazing! So beautifully created with such an inspirational message. A work of art! All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:12:00 PM
Thank you,Sandra, I'm always love your visits I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/26/2018 11:30:00 AM
Amazing!! I can't even image something this creative!
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:14:00 PM
Thank you, Dale, I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/26/2018 9:48:00 AM
ohh my, this is both an artwork and a poem... i am in awe, eve; so stunning ... huggs
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:16:00 PM
Thank you, Nette, I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem it means a lot from you. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/26/2018 9:18:00 AM
Excellent concrete Eve...love, god's castles...stay in the light and best of luck for a win...^WW^
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:17:00 PM
Thank you, ^WW^, for the good luck..I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/26/2018 9:02:00 AM
Brilliantly done Eve. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:19:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, for the luck...I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/26/2018 7:53:00 AM
Very creative Eve.. You did this very well..
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:20:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One, I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/26/2018 7:25:00 AM
Awesome! Wonderful, artistic, well done, Eve!!
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:23:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/26/2018 4:36:00 AM
A creative piece, my dear...Art in words...All the best Eve
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:23:00 PM
Thank you,Arturo, I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 3/26/2018 2:33:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:24:00 PM
Thank you, Ravi, I'm tickled you enjoyed my poem. Hugs Eve ~`*

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