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Concrete Dreams

flight mission controls checked and bound for another blackhole engines prepped and fired up as eyes of wonder begin to shut cloud-shaped sheep are hopping fences numbering each as countdown commences Announcement: Houston, we have a go! Launch - the coordinates passing Star Nebula row - G-force floating - flying through infinity outside my window - gloating Warp speed in time not throughout space collect all data to save the human race!!! A concrete plan within this willowy plane circling freely through the twirling stains I will miss deep space when I land again. Entering the atmosphere where music appears beep beep beep beep 4/26/2018 concrete contest

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Date: 3/18/2021 6:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderfully creative poem Lukas. Congratulations on your win! Blessings
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Date: 1/15/2021 5:47:00 PM
I know it was fun to write because it was a fun read. Real good expression and imagery. Good job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/27/2018 2:13:00 PM
You have created a Masterpiece!! :) Such vivid images you have painted with your words. Perfect shape indeed. I am counting down. Three, Two, One- Blast Off!! Congratulations Lukas, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 12/18/2018 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Brandy! It was fun to write and I am glad you enjoyed reading it just as much :)
Date: 5/5/2018 2:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Lukas!:-)
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/7/2018 10:02:00 AM
Thanks! :)
Date: 5/4/2018 9:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this fun poem, Lucas.
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/7/2018 10:00:00 AM
thanks! :)
Date: 5/4/2018 12:59:00 PM
Geeze! Amazing! Congratulations on your win with this awesome presentation and poem. Very clever and creative!
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/7/2018 9:59:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 5/4/2018 6:14:00 AM
I really enjoyed this piece Lucas! Congratulations on your win in my contest! xomo :)
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/7/2018 9:59:00 AM
thank you :)

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