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Concerning the Achievement of Life Goals - Keep It Simple

insects set but two: eating and copulating (sounds okay to me) Footnote: Goal #3 - Winning or placing in PD's Haiku contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2015 8:43:00 PM

hmm, this one was pretty good!!! Wish I saw it higher on the list, but it's fun to see it again, Tim.

Skat A

Date: 7/31/2015 1:31:00 PM

TIM, Congrats on your win. SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 10:57:00 PM

Congrats on ur brilliant winning poem Tim! Great work!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2015 2:46:00 PM

Tim :), Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my giggle haiku contest. I enjoyed reading every entry placed on the winning list. Stop by my latest blog "MY CAT" if you'd like or have the time. Yours Truly! ~LINDA~

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/13/2015 2:48:00 AM

Nice one Tim! You never fail to put a smile on my face. ( : Always, Laura

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/13/2015 11:04:00 AM

Sounds OK to me as well. Its amusing and entertaining all in one. Emile.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/12/2015 1:22:00 PM

Very witty, Tim! "Sounds okay to me" as well. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2015 12:06:00 AM

WOW, Tim :) I have this one on hold.. I love the goal, looking forward to making you my star :) Love it, I don't know about the sound, however... hehhe..Linda

Constance La France

Date: 4/9/2015 10:42:00 AM

Tim, those insects may have a short life but it must be a happy life, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry, yes, it is odd for me to write happy but refreshing for the soul