Concerned Snowman

I’m a snowman standing on my head
built by Harry and his brother Fred,
With Just five balls of snow
two which are not on show,
Where they’ll put that large carrot I dread.



12/29/2017
Contest upside down world
Sponsored by Eve Roper.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 1/13/2018 7:57:00 PM
I REALLY loved this one Roy!!! Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/15/2018 6:34:00 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations Jan, I’m over the moon with my placement and to receive a comment like yours is more than encouraging, thank you again, Roy. :))
Date: 1/7/2018 11:07:00 PM
Hi Roy, This is so funny and very clever. Congrats on your winning write it was well deserved:-)Alexis
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Date: 1/8/2018 3:17:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Alexis, Your support is really appreciated. :))
Date: 1/7/2018 7:13:00 PM
Lol, this is very cute and funny Roy! Congrats on a fine win!~Che :)
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Date: 1/8/2018 3:13:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Cheryl, your support is really appreciated. :))
Date: 1/7/2018 7:03:00 PM
I don't know your placement as I am not at the contest winner list. But I hope this was one of the top winners. It was surely one of my favorites. Congrats
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Date: 1/8/2018 3:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, I’m over the moon with my placement in this wonderful contest and to receive your congratulations that has given my confidence boost, thanks again Roy. :))
Date: 1/7/2018 11:57:00 AM
This is cute and funny, Roy:) I see that the invisible balls have inspired quite a number of the participants! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/7/2018 12:37:00 PM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations Paul, your support is really appreciated. :))
Date: 1/7/2018 10:59:00 AM
Lmao. So witty and full of humor. Love it! Great job, Roy. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved.
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Date: 1/7/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Rhoda really pleased you liked this. :))
Date: 1/6/2018 3:39:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Roy, Very clever.
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Date: 1/7/2018 9:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Line for your very kind comment and congratulations much appreciated. :))
Date: 1/6/2018 12:47:00 PM
Very clever. Congrats on your top placement and the placement of the carrot in the last line.
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Date: 1/7/2018 9:58:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congratulations Richard really appreciated. :))
Date: 1/6/2018 12:43:00 AM
Love the last line, Roy, congrats! regards, Viv
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Date: 1/7/2018 9:56:00 AM
Thanks for your congratulations Viv much appreciated. :))
Date: 1/5/2018 7:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Roy, wonderful limerick. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/7/2018 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and placement in your wonderful contest Eve. :))
Date: 1/5/2018 6:04:00 AM
If different wins then this one should be in the winner's line up..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 1/5/2018 6:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Sara which is much appreciated especially from an accomplished poet as you are, thanks again. :))
Date: 1/3/2018 12:20:00 PM
Hello Roy, I enjoyed reading your poem I had a chuckle. All the best for the New Year. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/3/2018 4:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Darlene, Makes me very happy that you enjoyed my fun write, I wish you a very happy new year my friend. :))
Date: 12/31/2017 7:29:00 PM
haha, This is GREAT, Roy. TOnight I have seen two really good snowmen poems!!! Yours is one of them
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Date: 1/1/2018 5:39:00 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Andrea which has given me a good feeling on this first day of 2018 thanks. :))
Date: 12/31/2017 12:14:00 PM
- Thanks for this, Roy :))) ... very funny :))) - Luck in the contest - Best wishes in the new year 2018 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/31/2017 12:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your very kind comment and thank for your support and encouragement in 2017, best wishes Roy. :))
Date: 12/29/2017 4:08:00 PM
Love this limerick Roy, so funny.
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Roy Pett
Date: 12/29/2017 5:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth for your very kind comment, really appreciated. :))
Date: 12/29/2017 1:36:00 PM
Funny Roy! Well done for the contest :)
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Date: 12/29/2017 5:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi, really pleased you liked this fun write. :))
Date: 12/29/2017 12:08:00 PM
Very funny--awesome write--clever words.
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Date: 12/29/2017 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Vijay for your very kind comment, wishing you and yours a very happy new year, Roy. :))
Date: 12/29/2017 11:57:00 AM
ha ha ha hilarious Rot lol good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/29/2017 12:16:00 PM
Thanks Jan, your very kind comment and best wishes makes me less concerned about whether I hit the brief, wishing you and yours a very happy new year, Roy. :))
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