Concerned Snowman

I’m a snowman standing on my head
built by Harry and his brother Fred,
With Just five balls of snow
two which are not on show,
Where they’ll put that large carrot I dread.



12/29/2017
Contest upside down world
Sponsored by Eve Roper.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
January 13, 2018 at 7:57 PM
I REALLY loved this one Roy!!! Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Pett Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 6:34 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulations Jan, I’m over the moon with my placement and to receive a comment like yours is more than encouraging, thank you again, Roy. :))
Y. Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 11:07 PM
Hi Roy, This is so funny and very clever. Congrats on your winning write it was well deserved:-)Alexis
Pett Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 3:17 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Alexis, Your support is really appreciated. :))
Hoffman Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Lol, this is very cute and funny Roy! Congrats on a fine win!~Che :)
Pett Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 3:13 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Cheryl, your support is really appreciated. :))
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:03 PM
I don't know your placement as I am not at the contest winner list. But I hope this was one of the top winners. It was surely one of my favorites. Congrats
Pett Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 3:11 AM
Thank you so much Andrea, I’m over the moon with my placement in this wonderful contest and to receive your congratulations that has given my confidence boost, thanks again Roy. :))
Callus Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 11:57 AM
This is cute and funny, Roy:) I see that the invisible balls have inspired quite a number of the participants! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
Pett Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations Paul, your support is really appreciated. :))
Tripp Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:59 AM
Lmao. So witty and full of humor. Love it! Great job, Roy. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved.
Pett Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 11:16 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Rhoda really pleased you liked this. :))
Gauthier Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 3:39 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Roy, Very clever.
Pett Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 9:59 AM
Thank you so much Line for your very kind comment and congratulations much appreciated. :))
Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Very clever. Congrats on your top placement and the placement of the carrot in the last line.
Pett Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Thank you very much for your congratulations Richard really appreciated. :))
Wigley Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 12:43 AM
Love the last line, Roy, congrats! regards, Viv
Pett Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Thanks for your congratulations Viv much appreciated. :))
Roper Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 7:40 PM
Congratulations on your win, Roy, wonderful limerick. Hugs Eve ~`*
Pett Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 9:55 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and placement in your wonderful contest Eve. :))
Kendrick Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 6:04 AM
If different wins then this one should be in the winner's line up..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Pett Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Sara which is much appreciated especially from an accomplished poet as you are, thanks again. :))
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Hello Roy, I enjoyed reading your poem I had a chuckle. All the best for the New Year. Have a nice day my friend.
Pett Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 4:14 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Darlene, Makes me very happy that you enjoyed my fun write, I wish you a very happy new year my friend. :))
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 7:29 PM
haha, This is GREAT, Roy. TOnight I have seen two really good snowmen poems!!! Yours is one of them
Pett Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment Andrea which has given me a good feeling on this first day of 2018 thanks. :))
Andresen Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 12:14 PM
- Thanks for this, Roy :))) ... very funny :))) - Luck in the contest - Best wishes in the new year 2018 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 12:30 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your very kind comment and thank for your support and encouragement in 2017, best wishes Roy. :))
Kinch  Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 4:08 PM
Love this limerick Roy, so funny.
Pett Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 5:19 PM
Thank you so much Elizabeth for your very kind comment, really appreciated. :))
Sands Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Funny Roy! Well done for the contest :)
Pett Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 5:17 PM
Thank you so much Heidi, really pleased you liked this fun write. :))
Pandit Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 12:08 PM
Very funny--awesome write--clever words.
Pett Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 12:19 PM
Thanks Vijay for your very kind comment, wishing you and yours a very happy new year, Roy. :))
Allison Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 11:57 AM
ha ha ha hilarious Rot lol good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Pett Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 12:16 PM
Thanks Jan, your very kind comment and best wishes makes me less concerned about whether I hit the brief, wishing you and yours a very happy new year, Roy. :))
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