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Concerned

I was concerned for my closest mate Gus,
He had problems he needs to discuss,
It’s a woman Gus said,
It’s the one that you wed...
I’ve heard she’s been cheating on us.

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Phyllis Babcock

September 2, 2015 at 10:42 AM

Ha ha seen my friend Andrea was wondering if you were a guy like I first did when we started writing poems. I think it took me a year when a poem made me think is Lindsay a guy so I asked and you were. You write such lovely descriptive poetry my friend. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

May 29, 2015 at 4:30 PM

haha, Don't worry (answering what you said below. I knew it was not true. But you ARE a guy, right?)

Lindsay Laurie

June 3, 2015 at 4:12 AM

Oh gosh no Andrea, it's not true in my life, but I dare say there has been a slip of the tongue somewhere, and yes, I am a bloke - catch you later Andrea - Lindsay

Funom Makama

May 27, 2015 at 6:59 AM

excellent piece. returning after a while to read such a refreshing package full of familiar emotions to the mind is simply blissful. A wonderful and commanding 7 here. Keep on writing.

Lindsay Laurie

June 3, 2015 at 4:10 AM

G'day Funom... thank you for leaving an encouraging comment. I'm pleased that you got a chuckle out of my nonsense - Lindsay

Queen Malicious

May 25, 2015 at 6:58 PM

This is great Lindsay and it rhyms real well I am keen for another one! Hug* Valkyrie!

Lindsay Laurie

May 25, 2015 at 9:21 PM

Hello Valkyrie... thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I do prefer to write rhyming verse - catch you - Lindsay

Maurice Rigoler

May 25, 2015 at 6:33 AM

This is a gem, Lindsay! It reads so smoothly with good rhymes. Wish I had written it. Thanks for reading my take on the pope. / M

Lindsay Laurie

May 25, 2015 at 9:19 PM

Hello Maurice... thank you Maurice for dropping by. I enjoyed your take on the pope. Some of his understudies have been naughty down here and they're being locked up - Lindsay