Concepts

When people see me
They say look at the wanna be
But who am I realy
Do any of yall know
Can any of yall see
The true colors of one's soul
Read people like me
And then have the discipline
To hide what you're dieing to show
No I didn't think so
This world has lost all hope
And if you religious people wanna make it to hevean
Then stop listening to the pope
Think about it
What would God rather you do
Trust him by listening to your heart
Or listen to what other imperfect humans tell you
And just forget all about the free-will part
Does God judge on how you listen to other humans 
Or how you listen to him
Forget the bible 
Forget the ten commandments
Now listen closely because its 
Hard to grasp these concepts
Its not what you do that matters
But the reason you do it
And now to polotics
How retarded can I be
Because it seems
I'm the only person who favors Anarchy
People say its mass chaos
And I say their sight is at loss
The world started off in Anarchy
Maybe God wanted it like that
It is a possibility
Now take a second
Reflect on your life
Are you feeling empty
I hope you realize you cause your own strife
And hopefully you've opened your eyes
Behonest with your self
Don't tell your self lies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/12/2009 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Nathan. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2009 9:25:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry with us today Nathan. Love, Carol
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