Concealing a Battle

It’s happening again.
Red-hot Guerrillas breaching my porcelain surface,
Angry little bombs exploding, leaving
my land a red war zone,

And I can’t find Concealer,
who has gone A.W.O.L, deserted its place in line,
after Foundation, before Powder.
I send Hands to search the recesses of my desk,
the scattered costumes on my floor.
Their time bombs tick
And I need Concealer for this daily battle.

After the red formations attack my foundations,
they battle against Powder,
forcing my team back to expose my land;
blemished, riddled with unwanted lumps.
A wasteland uncovered,
and Concealer my only defence able to 
hide the scars, the age, this weakness.

I send on the second wave;
Foundations, Powder, Mascara – all charades to
distract the public from my flaws.
Reluctantly I slither out into their gaze,
Exposed,
praying my cover hides what the
snarling, ruthless army
strives to conquer: to
Unmask what I truly am.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/31/2011 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Holly. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2011 6:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Holly
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Date: 5/29/2011 4:47:00 PM
holly~ Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. Nice to stop by and check out all featured poem. Have a wonderful day~always,..p.d.
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Date: 4/2/2011 4:22:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn
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Date: 4/1/2011 2:01:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight .. great visuals and imagery emerge from your lines.. happy weekend luv..
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