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Concave Reasoning

Concave Reasoning he seemed a bit demented then again, his head was dented yet he tried his best – and meant it once they got his head cemented some said he was tormented his thoughts too long fermented inside a head once dented yet only recently cemented he seemed to be contented in a world disoriented and he never quite repented for the thoughts he only rented so that he could present it mental cash – he quickly spent it on reasoning augmented with logic yet unscented so his teachers all lamented these theories he invented after all – his head was dented only recently cemented ©12/23/2017 submitted to – NEW YEAR STANDARD CONTEST ANY FORM OR NONE – poetry contest

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Date: 1/3/2018 5:16:00 AM
Love the title!! How appropriate for this great write!! Humorous and entertaining! Best of luck in the contest John!! ~ Judy
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Date: 1/2/2018 6:37:00 PM
I think this one is a real winner, contest or no contest. I especially liked the "fulcrum" on which it rests: "his head was dented only recently cemented." 3.5 times was just right! ---A great read!
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Date: 1/2/2018 11:24:00 AM
And your poem not resented but greatly complimented-- Well done! A fine entry. Good luck.
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Date: 1/2/2018 11:20:00 AM
What great fun to read. Can't comment on any particular line, as the whole meshes so cleverly with itself. I wrote a similar one in monorhyme called The Pompous Poet.
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Date: 1/2/2018 10:15:00 AM
Very witty and completely entertaining. I enjoyed the read, John. All the best ... CayCay
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