Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Free verse

Computer Dear

Computer dear




Everyday when I switch on my computer,
I say to myself,
Gets up from sleep at my one touch,
Recharged, he appears with a huge smile,
Is he in love with me ?

Taking all my commands throughout the day,
And still giving his best,
Eye to eye without a flicker,
Working with me in unison,
I have the keys to his heart,
As he unlocks my brain,

Takes me to google, 
And we travel around the world,
Keeps me updated what come may,
One button click and its a child's play,
 
Anything that becomes obsolete,
He helps me by selection of  delete,
Each data that will sincerely behave,
I am able to place it under save,
He is my work passion, a must obsession,

Modern life, technology will surely steer,
There's no life without you computer dear !




Written April 8th, 2015
For contest "Computer poem" by Carol Eastman

Awarded 1st place

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Poet Destroyer A April 18, 2015 at 6:57 PM Nice win... LINDA

Richard Lamoureux April 18, 2015 at 8:49 AM So glad to see this one on the winners list Upma!

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2015 at 10:24 PM oh, I just love your sweet approach to "him" This is one of the cutest I have read, Dr. Upma. A SEVEN.

Sandra Haight April 16, 2015 at 4:15 PM Yes, Dr. Upma, how did we ever live without them! I like all the positives you image in your poem about this modern tech! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison April 16, 2015 at 3:07 PM loved the personification - congrats on your win Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso April 11, 2015 at 1:20 AM I have the sneaking suspicion you wish the computer was a man!!!!!! LOL Loved this!

Constance La France April 10, 2015 at 3:08 PM Upma, I like your computer poem, 7, you have a "nice" computer mine can be very mean at times best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry

Paul Callus April 10, 2015 at 12:45 PM Sweet and lovely take on this computer theme, Upma! Computers are such a help, till the hard-disc goes booooom! gl in the contest. // paul

Sara Kendrick April 10, 2015 at 12:18 PM Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Using personification is a good method to use..Thanks for your review of my work..Sara

Richard Lamoureux April 10, 2015 at 8:26 AM I like your use of personification. Well done Upma.

Jack Ellison April 10, 2015 at 7:22 AM "And we travel around the world!"... this is the amazing and wonderful part to me! Methinks this will do well in Carol's contest! Hugs, Jack xxx

Andrea Dietrich April 9, 2015 at 11:45 PM so true, so true!! I bet this does well in the contest. I loved your comment "killer thoughts!!" to my senryu.

Eileen Manassian April 8, 2015 at 1:00 PM Adorable poem, my dear Dr Upma. It should and must do well, for it is ever sweet. Hugs to you.

Jerry T Curtis April 8, 2015 at 7:37 AM This is and interesting observance and a probable peek into the future of relationships of mankind and machine. I enjoyed your thoughts Dr.