Compromising Positions

A night that truly almost never came
A number that I almost never called
And yet when I look back I am enthralled
Since then my life has never been the same

We met and I knew nothing but your name
How could I plan when nothing, I recalled
My nerves had taken over and I stalled
I never knew just how to play this game

I thought I’d just be safe for our first date
So I suggested dinner and a flick
A comedy should somehow do the trick
But, oh the choice of food was not so great

Though compromised, I made it through the night
And not one memory would I rewrite


1/24/18

Contest: A First Date
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri

"Compromising Positions" is a 1985 comedy starring Susan Sarandon.
It wasn’t a great movie but one that I will never forget.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 1:05 PM
sounds like a very memorable occasion Mike... i am not a great one for movies... i usually fall asleep and I can do that at home for free lol:-) hugs jan xx
Gentile Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 3:01 PM
It was not the best first date and not the worst but it was the beginning of a great relationship xxoo Happy Monday!!
Sands Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 4:08 PM
You have done well with this sonnet Mike. Food isn't always good lol. Good luck in the contest :)
Gentile Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Thanks Heidi, Happy Thursday xxoo
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:36 PM
- Although the food was a bad choice - One can live long ... on a good laugh :) - A great poem to the contest ... good luck, Mike - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:45 PM
Thank you so much, I was young, I'll cut myself some slack, !!! The laugh is more important!
Pandit Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:15 PM
I enjoyed reading your story...some memories are better than others..the movie still occupies you...best for a win, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Thanks Vijay!!
One Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:14 PM
Great poem for the contest Mike..
Gentile Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 1:33 PM
Thank you, Silent One !!
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