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Of the millions Of stars out there Expanding, Stretching time, Described by numbers That mesmerise- Larger than the Universal Container Of all comprehension And light- Near one, are cares! Of the billions Of cares on there- Nothing but Nothing Compares, in a Pivotal moment, To a single one’s Despair!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/28/2010 12:56:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem tonight, David! Wish you a great day in Dublin!...And thank you for your comments!...Gert
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Date: 7/28/2010 6:33:00 AM
What a great array of poetry we have been presented to read today. I am happy yours is one of those poems I have read today. I hope your day brings you much inspiration so you may continue presenting your poetry to us to read David. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2010 12:40:00 AM
I'm always mesmerized by stars,and there is always that star that somehow shines brighter,whenever I am in my own despair,whenever I can't see that comprehension of light,somehow that star always find its way to me,and somehow in that vast black universe,if it doesn't sparkle,it twinkles,its all about believing,I love the way you comprehend your verse Mr Byrne :)C.C.
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Date: 7/28/2010 12:24:00 AM
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Date: 7/27/2010 10:47:00 PM
A pivotal poem, David! Interesting reflection upon the Universe.
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Date: 7/27/2010 5:00:00 PM
You answered my thought...and yes gifts always help a wife forgive!! ha ha!
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Date: 7/27/2010 4:37:00 PM
Things are NEVER as bad as they seem.. there is a purpose to everything that happens in our lives... roll with the punches and enjoy the ride.. sometimes its bumpy ..ah but when its smooth...its awesome... look at my situation.. that should give u hope and inspiration ... for the future.. luv..
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Date: 7/27/2010 1:06:00 PM
One thing is certain David, we will never comprehend the reason of being. By the way this is a very cleaver poem ENJOYED,..p.d.
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