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like the undersong of mind every thought sings of you the sweetest melody i long to be your greatest lyric fallen on ivory sheets be the strings beneath the caress of your fingers as you strum a euphony feel the beat echo through my heart as your rhythm carries me into the depths of harmony i want to be the whispered words sung from your lips until they meet with mine in a hush of silence then linger in your mind like a song you've sung a thousand times but can never forget the lyrics to

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/31/2019 10:55:00 AM

Sandy congrats on your win! Happy new year my friend!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/31/2019 11:00:00 AM

Thank you Brenda.... Happy New Year to you.... hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/21/2019 11:11:00 AM

A passionate beautiful write dear Sandy - your poetry is loving - i long to read it and fav. a great many of your amazing poems. Blessings, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/21/2019 10:30:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer,what a kind thing to say, i am honored by your comment... love the new photo... hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/21/2019 3:41:00 AM

Any man with a romantic heart would rush forward to make your every wish true dearest, Sandra. A superb romantic poem.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/21/2019 10:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Demetrios... hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/20/2019 5:22:00 PM

This is sweet--a song fit for love--tenderly rendered--lovely poem, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/20/2019 7:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay :) hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/20/2019 3:37:00 PM

No woman should wish for less; no man could wiish for more. A true prmer on desire in a wish. Bravo! :) gw

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/20/2019 7:45:00 PM

Thank you Gershon...i'll be the first to admit that i am a dreamer... hugs :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/20/2019 2:59:00 PM

This has a lyrical sense about it. "I long to be your greatest lyric fallen on ivory sheets" = fabulous imagery.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/20/2019 7:45:00 PM

Thank you so much Caren.... it was a fun write that came out of nowhere... hugs

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/20/2019 11:50:00 AM

A beautiful song of love and passion. Amazing.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/20/2019 12:14:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend... hugs...:)

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/20/2019 10:05:00 AM

WoW! Sandra, I found your lyrical piece to be very romantic. You composed such a touching and heartfelt song. Well done. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/20/2019 10:14:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis... this one was haunting my muse today...i don't know why...perhaps something to do with the white dove i saw yesterday...i was reading on what it means to see one... hugs... :) you do the same my kind friend

Chris Green

Date: 12/20/2019 9:39:00 AM

The sweetest song I could imagine. You have composed a beautifully lyrical poem that sings of love and deep desire my friend. Your words have melodically touched this musicians heart in the most magical way. Beautiful Sandy, simply beautiful. Sigh.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/20/2019 9:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris...this one started invading my morning thoughts...it wouldn't go away so i wrote it out...i guess my muse is still stuck in yesterday's kiss poems... your comment is equally beautiful :) hugs