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like the undersong of mind every thought sings of you the sweetest melody i long to be your greatest lyric fallen on ivory sheets be the strings beneath the caress of your fingers as you strum a euphony feel the beat echo through my heart as your rhythm carries me into the depths of harmony i want to be the whispered words sung from your lips until they meet with mine in a hush of silence then linger in your mind like a song you've sung a thousand times but can never forget the lyrics to

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Date: 12/31/2019 10:55:00 AM
Sandy congrats on your win! Happy new year my friend!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/31/2019 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Brenda.... Happy New Year to you.... hugs
Date: 12/21/2019 11:11:00 AM
A passionate beautiful write dear Sandy - your poetry is loving - i long to read it and fav. a great many of your amazing poems. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 12/21/2019 10:30:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer,what a kind thing to say, i am honored by your comment... love the new photo... hugs
Date: 12/21/2019 3:41:00 AM
Any man with a romantic heart would rush forward to make your every wish true dearest, Sandra. A superb romantic poem.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/21/2019 10:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios... hugs
Date: 12/20/2019 5:22:00 PM
This is sweet--a song fit for love--tenderly rendered--lovely poem, Sandy.
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Date: 12/20/2019 7:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay :) hugs
Date: 12/20/2019 3:37:00 PM
No woman should wish for less; no man could wiish for more. A true prmer on desire in a wish. Bravo! :) gw
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Date: 12/20/2019 7:45:00 PM
Thank you Gershon...i'll be the first to admit that i am a dreamer... hugs :)
Date: 12/20/2019 2:59:00 PM
This has a lyrical sense about it. "I long to be your greatest lyric fallen on ivory sheets" = fabulous imagery.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/20/2019 7:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Caren.... it was a fun write that came out of nowhere... hugs
Date: 12/20/2019 11:50:00 AM
A beautiful song of love and passion. Amazing.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 12/20/2019 12:14:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend... hugs...:)
Date: 12/20/2019 10:05:00 AM
WoW! Sandra, I found your lyrical piece to be very romantic. You composed such a touching and heartfelt song. Well done. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/20/2019 10:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis... this one was haunting my muse today...i don't know why...perhaps something to do with the white dove i saw yesterday...i was reading on what it means to see one... hugs... :) you do the same my kind friend
Date: 12/20/2019 9:39:00 AM
The sweetest song I could imagine. You have composed a beautifully lyrical poem that sings of love and deep desire my friend. Your words have melodically touched this musicians heart in the most magical way. Beautiful Sandy, simply beautiful. Sigh.
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Date: 12/20/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris...this one started invading my morning thoughts...it wouldn't go away so i wrote it out...i guess my muse is still stuck in yesterday's kiss poems... your comment is equally beautiful :) hugs