Complex Alliteration - Hastily Hiding Wisely Waiting
HASTILY HIDING WISELY WAITING
Flying fish are really gliding, gracefully so.
Frantically, from so many predatory piranhas.
Silkily, sliding into the most fearsome fray!
Hastily hiding, in very thick growing, sightly sedges.
Wisely waiting until the predators pass.
Satisfyingly safe, start to safely fly feeding.
Dusk darkening, welcoming much needed silent sleep.
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1st line- x syllables 13
2nd line- x+2 syllables 15
3rd line- x-1 syllables 12
4th line- (x+2)-1 syllables 14
5th line- x-2 syllables 11
6th line- (x+2)-2 syllables 13
7th line- x syllables 13
Which allows for infinite syllable sequences. An example, in the first line x=13:
Copyright © Mick Talbot | Year Posted 2017
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