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Complex

Had it been my expectations  or was 
it betrayal.                 
The insights withdraw insanity 
climbing up with prayers 
In real time when I was never real,
In hopeless nights when I was never 
hopeless....
All of a sudden had the world 
changed or had my devotion
The birds dint stop chirping,n sky 
expanding, n I was still in motion
Motion never ceases but getting 
ceased is not motion 
With words that I play getting more 
trapped in emotion
 through the frame less windows  
when they pry
Getting self sustained........they cry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/21/2016 11:02:00 AM
Avani, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/24/2015 12:33:00 PM
LOVE THE POEM
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Date: 2/28/2013 7:37:00 AM
really nice write
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Date: 2/4/2013 4:28:00 PM
Ohmygosh. This is...empowering. It flows and draws you in. I think you did a brilliant job on this write (:
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Date: 1/31/2013 7:38:00 PM
Welcome to the soup, Complex would be a good title, valiant effort.
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Avani Jain
Date: 2/1/2013 2:10:00 AM
Thanks for d welcome N also thank you for the suggession
Date: 1/31/2013 7:48:00 AM
welcome to poetrysoup.nice write.
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Avani Jain
Date: 2/1/2013 2:11:00 AM
Thank u so much :-)

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