Completness

Completness is an overwhelming feeling
To feel so as one with another is outstanding
Two minds that share such understanding 
I feel the deepest of admire for what I find
So many sides to one all adding to, thee one 
A man I find myself wanting so much more
A ticking of the clock that just does not stop
A moment that I miss as soon as your kiss has gone 
We feel the same a twisting of fate within
For you are now a new beginning of once past twin souls
Waiting of oceans of time to know all my cries were heard
I would sit and dream of a man to be the man you are
Your way everyday I know my heart is now saved 
I would walk a life time again with pain that breaks the soul
As long as I was to be granted another lifetime with you 
For my heart longs to be next to yours for evermore
To wake with your smile and the embrace that you hold
When I awake from my sleep its like I am still in my dream
To see you lay upon my pillow your softness of skin beside me
When you are not there I find the moments leave me cold
Just the scent of you lingers to my senses
I truely find myself inlove with the man that you are 
Spirited and wise I find myself inlove no other word ,it is love
With a man that is this and so much more I love and adore
Together we are souls alive through heated desire and admire
Our passion runs deep like the heat from the flame
Through heated desire and admire I am inlove in all its name 
I am Inlove with my man I say without no shame ....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/1/2010 11:36:00 AM
Completeness is a lovely outcome when one meets a partner and one clicks. Beautiful flow in this piece Sarah >> James
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Date: 9/1/2010 7:41:00 AM
I could feel the joy you have in your heart upon finding this special man whom you had sought for so long, Sarah. I hope the "passion runs" throughout your lifetime. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:31:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry Sarah. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:17:00 PM
Very descriptive of a relationship that is based upon interests and goals shared as well as a sexual attraction...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 8/31/2010 2:27:00 PM
Meaningful write, love the expressions and thoughts shared...always Michael ps. will check out FB, didn't forget
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Date: 8/31/2010 2:26:00 PM
as usual you have created a very emotionally charged poem with such vivid images. your power grows by the minute my lady. i enjoyed this one so much. keep up the great work baby.
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