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the ocean pouring coldness. sour taste and shrub smell. willow trees emit long screams. lone bird calls from quiet sky you see, that's one down!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/30/2021 2:15:00 AM
This must be some special bird. Pity if it cannot procreate, Well writ.
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Date: 12/29/2021 3:07:00 PM
Creative lines penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. I hope that it is not the last one. I don't think I have seen a species more beautiful. Sara
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Date: 12/29/2021 10:18:00 AM
- Sad that this beautiful and colorful bird is alone ... maybe it will find a new friend - Have a wonderful new year, Las - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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