Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Cinquain

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- Complete Spring -

seedling
                                            summer flower
                                        preparing the season
                                 renewing sleeping winter heart
                                                 debut





                                             25.04.2023
                                     Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                      Cinquain Poetry Contest
                                     Sponsored by: Sotto Poet
                                      2nd place in the contest

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Sara Kendrick May 3, 2023 at 7:51 AM Back with congratulations on this winning work in Lasaad's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara Reply

Sam Kauffman May 1, 2023 at 11:24 AM Just lovely my friend! This poem sinks its roots deeply into the metaphoric soil of the growing heart! Just wonderful Congratulations on your win! Hugs and blessings!

Linda Alice Fowler April 29, 2023 at 10:50 AM Hello dear Anne-Lise. Love this sprouting poem. Congratulations on your win! :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2023 at 12:45 PM - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Linda :) - hugs

Ann Peck April 28, 2023 at 9:18 AM That's so lovely, Sunshine! Congratulations! Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2023 at 12:45 PM - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Ann :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith April 28, 2023 at 8:24 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. Hooray!!! I enjoyed reading it again. "Lovely" Hugs... Have a blessed day/weekend................ Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2023 at 12:45 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris April 28, 2023 at 4:35 AM Sunshine, Congratulations on your win in the Contest.. I like your poem... Seedling ,replanting and havesting in the future. Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2023 at 12:44 PM - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Alfonso :) - hugs

Valsa George April 27, 2023 at 7:22 PM Enjoyed the debut of seedlings. Beautiful cinquain with a beautiful image. Congratulations on your win, dear Smile. :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2023 at 12:44 PM - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs

Sotto Poet April 27, 2023 at 6:15 PM Thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem in my Poetry Contest.  Congratulations on your win Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2023 at 12:46 PM - Many thanks for my win in your contest, Las :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2023 at 4:15 PM love that debut, Sunshine Anne-Lise Andresen April 28, 2023 at 1:49 AM - Many thanks, Andrea :) - hugs

Joanna Daniel April 27, 2023 at 6:49 AM Soft and inspiring, Sunshine:) Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2023 at 6:51 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Jo :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes April 26, 2023 at 3:17 PM Lovely Ann-Lise Beautiful wording, perfect syllable count and word count. Perfect Cinquain. Good luck in the competition it should do very well. Besides which, I love it. :)

Mike Gentile April 26, 2023 at 5:13 AM And it is a debut we are awaiting Anne-Lise! A beautiful, seasonal wish this is! happy Wednesday xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 5:31 AM - Happy Wednesday to you too, Mike ...many thanks for your lovely comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar April 26, 2023 at 2:00 AM Lovely cinquain. Hope you'll get lots of flowers. Hugs. Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 2:11 AM - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Victor :) - hugs

Arlo Parker April 25, 2023 at 7:23 PM Beautiful prelude to a much needed Spring. Thanks for posting such a positive piece, SS. ~;o) Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 1:14 AM - Many thanks, Arlo ... we must have hope ... even if it is snowing today and does not look like spring at all - hugs

Sotto Poet April 25, 2023 at 6:21 PM A beautiful poem and illustration, full of the hopeful expectation of springtime. I hope you do well in the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 1:10 AM - Thank you, Las ... it is up to the sponsor who will win :) - hugs

Panagiota Romios April 25, 2023 at 4:50 PM You are indeed awesome. Winter heart debut is lovely.’mm Pangie Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 1:08 AM - Spring/Winter ??? ... we have + 4 degrees and snow today ... ice cold, Pangie ... o.m.g. !!! - Thank you :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit April 25, 2023 at 3:49 PM So much inspiration sprouting through--announcing the debut of new season. Much enjoyed. Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 1:05 AM - At this minute... it is snowing outside my window... almost unbelievable... many thanks for your lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose April 25, 2023 at 3:41 PM How I am longing for those first tender shoots to show Sunshine, almost there here in Toronto, we are still wearing our winter coats lol not far I'm sure, thank you for your presence, :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 26, 2023 at 1:02 AM - Spring will come, Vie Rose ... but is not quite ready yet - Many thanks for your words :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu April 25, 2023 at 11:04 AM Hello Sunshine Smile, A wonderful poem for Spring. Hugs./Darlene\ Darlene De Beaulieu April 25, 2023 at 4:01 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, your welcome my dear friend. Hugs. /Darlene\ Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 11:13 AM - Thank you so much, dear friend ... glad for your valuable commet :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 25, 2023 at 10:36 AM A lovely poem and picture, bursting with spring's joyous anticipation. Best wishes for the contest. :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 10:45 AM - Always exciting to plant seeds, Evelyn ... I love it :) - Many thanks for your lovely comment and best wishes :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham April 25, 2023 at 8:15 AM It's been a long time coming Anne but it's so welcome now it's here. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 10:29 AM Yes, you will need warm clothes Tom Cunningham April 25, 2023 at 9:13 AM I'd better bring winter clothes then lol Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 8:29 AM ...not here, Tom ... a strong and icy wind is blowing... still winter clothes :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith April 25, 2023 at 8:10 AM I really enjoyed your "Complete Spring" write/picture. Good Luck. I found this one to take more time/thought. Hugs....... Have a blessed day writing away................ Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 10:39 AM - Many thanks for the kind comment and good wishes, Paula :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick April 25, 2023 at 7:57 AM Those seedling looks so vulnerable, and tender don't they. I enjoyed this descriptive work. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 10:43 AM - I plant seeds every spring, Sara ... not all survive ... they don't like much wind or cold - Many thanks for your words :) - hugs