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Complete Embrace

His passionate hold Kept her ensnared and enthralled Forever his slave

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/27/2011 9:08:00 PM

Congrats on the nice win..Im sure there will be many more. BG

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/27/2011 2:46:00 PM

Renee congratulations on your win in Francine's contest ;)

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/27/2011 2:50:00 PM

Thank you, Wilma!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/27/2011 1:59:00 PM

great first line for a bodice ripper keep going!! Congrad's Light & Love

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/27/2011 2:05:00 PM

:D Debbie - I'll try to keep it going. Thanks for stopping by to read my little senryu :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/27/2011 1:29:00 PM

Congrats Renee on your spectacular win with this sensuous senryu luv.. perfect words.. and title too...luv..

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/27/2011 2:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Linda!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/27/2011 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sensuous Senryu's" contest Renee. Love, Carol

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/27/2011 12:16:00 PM

Thanks, Carol :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/27/2011 11:53:00 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of francine, Renee

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/27/2011 12:16:00 PM

Thank you, Ram!

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/27/2011 10:19:00 AM

Congratulations Renee on your win with this wonderful write; I hope you have many more, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/27/2011 10:23:00 AM

Thanks, Caryl!

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/27/2011 10:07:00 AM

congrats Renee on your 9th place win in the contest with this sensual entry

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/27/2011 10:10:00 AM

Fantastic! Thank you and it's an honor to have been listed with those much more talented than I!

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/26/2011 11:13:00 AM

A wonderful senryu and entry for the contest, I enjoyed the read. Best to you~ Caryl

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/26/2011 11:15:00 AM

Thank you, Caryl! What a lovely and unique way to spell your name - first time I've seen it spelled that way :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/26/2011 10:18:00 AM

Lovely humor and wit, Renee

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/26/2011 10:25:00 AM

Actually, it isn't intended as humorous or witty :) But thanks for reading all the same, Ram!

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/26/2011 8:38:00 AM

it's not showing in the contest as entered, I would like to see it entered in my contest

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/26/2011 8:44:00 AM

Ok, done! That wasn't as hard as I thought it would be LOL

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/26/2011 8:40:00 AM

Ok...let me see if I can do that. I've never entered any contests other than the standard Poetry Soup ones.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/26/2011 7:09:00 AM

Make it a Senryu and enter it in the contest... a winning write in my eyes...Michael

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/26/2011 8:12:00 AM

I've done exactly that. Thanks for tips :D

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/26/2011 7:08:00 AM

Very tender write , but should be a Senryu instead...Haiku is based on nature...Lovely words expressed....Michael

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 6/26/2011 7:21:00 AM

No problem, my pleasure to read your work.....Loved the write....Michael

Renee Kelly
Date: 6/26/2011 7:08:00 AM

Michael, ah! I'll change it - thanks! And thank you for reading it :)