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I am safe when you are near, like a baby nestled in his mother's arms. I can breathe without gasping and speak without stammering, my embarrassment fades in the glow of your smile. I need no safety net; there is no pretense. Your closeness brings a feeling of well-being. Dancing with the lights low and kissing in the rain, holding you so tight and hoping that you'll never let me go I feel complete.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/29/2008 8:28:00 AM
Keith, this is absolutely beautiful. True love knows no boundaries to how wonderful it can make us feel and you have captured it like a dream come true. Thank you for the reading recommendation. Going to use my Amazon gift certificate to purchase it! Warmest wishes for a beautiful new year. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/29/2008 7:38:00 AM
This is beautiful, Keith. Such wonderful phrases and loving emotin throughout. Thank you so much for all your kind and thoughtful words. They are all greatly appreciated. Here's to a happy and bright new year for all. GBY! Love, Robin
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Date: 12/29/2008 7:12:00 AM
Who wouldn't feel complete with all that my friend? The feelings expressed here are clear and expressed fluidly, softly. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 12/28/2008 6:04:00 PM
This has such tender, unabashed feelings. Just lovely! What a lucky woman who hears such words of love. Well done! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/28/2008 5:24:00 PM
Wonderful to feel that way...the last line is a winnder. Simple and yet so hard to come by. You write from your heart. BG
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Date: 12/28/2008 4:59:00 PM
What a feeling. so warm and tender, this poem is, beautiful, as always, Kristin
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