Complete-Delete

Alas...for now I do tweak
All of the rhymes I do seek
And just so you won't peek
All will be shared in a week

For with my writing, you see
The idea pops out rough to me
I have to polish it up - to a "T"
And round it out for all to see

I space - then re-space
All over the place
Like I'm in a race
Just to save my face

I complete - then delete
I repeat - with conceit
I think I'm SO neat
I repeat till I'm beat

And now it's here, that time that I fear
That dreaded deadline is actually here
And there is no time left now to clear
So I enter it fast, then grab a beer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/23/2013 9:19:00 PM
lol. You sound a bit like me. I take forever to come up with a piece and another forever to tweak the damn thing. In the end I turn anti-clockwise three times, howl to the moon, blink five times, post it and hope for the best. Nice write, Quentin. I'm enjoying your poetry. :)
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Quentin Ehlinger
Date: 4/26/2013 3:34:00 AM
Thanks! Glad you enjoy. Your lines are more colorful and complicated, so I know you probably have more work than I. My simple mind couldn't match your complex compositions. Keep it up!
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