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Competitive Space

Down at the local health club site Where barbells clank with muscled might The biggest display of competitive pace Is muscling for the closest parking space 11 September 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/16/2014 3:46:00 PM
hey, this is really quite creative. A really good one that should have placed higher! Congrats to you.
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Date: 9/16/2014 2:21:00 PM
I actually laughed out loud, Daniel. (It reminds me of my sister and her family.) Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/16/2014 11:27:00 AM
LOL this is funny - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2014 12:04:00 PM
Thank Jan. Love your diaper footle! Can see some deep experience here. Don't miss it, though! Daniel.
Date: 9/16/2014 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Daniel. I love your Chastushka. It's really funny and I can picture people scrambling for spots.
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Date: 9/16/2014 12:01:00 PM
Thank you Brenda! It would be funnier if it weren't so true! Daniel.
Date: 9/16/2014 6:39:00 AM
Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for the support, Daniel
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Daniel Human
Date: 9/16/2014 12:02:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram. Love your poems and have been following you for a while. Quite a privilege to be acknowledged by you. Daniel

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