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"COMMUNION" You speak to me in tongues I hear you with my heart I feel you with my mind Like a Spring bloom, I am slowly unfurling Like a ripe plum, you taste me in my rhymes You touch me black ink injected drug potent Red Poppies between lines I sense you in your dreams They are swelling next to mine Like a drunk, I swallow all your delicious words You turn into endless Golden Chalices of Altar Wine I see you through your mirrors COMMUNION You see me, walking now through mine. (Lovejoy-Burton/2018) EASTER John 19 NIV communion noun 1. the sharing or exchanging of intimate thoughts and feelings, especially on a mental or spiritual level. "in this churchyard communion with the dead was almost palpable" 2. the service of Christian worship at which bread and wine are consecrated and shared. synonyms: Eucharist, Holy Communion, Lord's Supper, Mass "he believed in Christ's presence among the faithful at Communion" 3. The Spirit, The Blood and The Water

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Date: 12/7/2022 5:59:00 PM
Vangelis/12 o'clock.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 12/7/2022 5:59:00 PM
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Date: 10/31/2022 6:53:00 PM
Is this the true body and face of Jesus Christ? "The First Hyperrealistic Body of Christ Based on the Holy Shroud" / EWTN, Youtube, 1 Nov 2022.
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Date: 10/31/2022 6:59:00 PM
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Date: 12/24/2021 10:26:00 PM
Jesus Real Face.
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Date: 12/24/2021 10:36:00 PM
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Date: 12/24/2021 10:35:00 PM
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Date: 12/24/2021 10:13:00 PM
"Behold My Face" says The Lord (The Face of Messiah as Revealed in the Shroud).
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 12/24/2021 10:13:00 PM
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Date: 12/9/2021 6:10:00 PM
"Only from the heart can you touch the Sky".
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Date: 12/9/2021 6:10:00 PM
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Date: 10/31/2021 7:29:00 PM
"I believe in the power of writing, like most believe in the power of prayer".
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Date: 2/5/2020 10:17:00 AM
Love <3
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Date: 4/11/2019 8:53:00 PM
Very brave, very selfless man. x
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/2/2021 1:04:00 AM
Whether He survived the crucifixion through life and continued to live His life as a 'man' (human), or was supernaturally resurrected; He was incredibly brave, very selfless and far from ordinary with a message firmly to be imprinted in the minds of man. There is poetry in His proverbs and messages. Some of the most beautiful poetry is delivered through Jesus Christ's thoughts, words and deeds.
Date: 11/18/2018 3:43:00 AM
DNA Message. (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vgcgf6EdXNw)
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/2/2021 1:04:00 AM
This is very intriguing.
Date: 11/8/2018 4:29:00 AM
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Date: 11/2/2018 2:34:00 PM
The Strongest "Poem" of All. x
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Date: 4/25/2018 7:31:00 PM
Hello Leanne, this is a very powerful poaem. I felt the pain in him. I saw the hurt in his eyes, and wanted to comfort him. He was hurting. have a nice evening my friend.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/25/2018 9:33:00 PM
Lots of LOVE to you and your's Darlene. He went through immense pain for all of us. I would stand by Him any day, no matter what the cost to myself. He deserves so much love and respect and loyalty. On with the day, on with LIFE. x
Date: 4/24/2018 1:41:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Leanne, I will carry it with the rest of the day and days to come. John
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/25/2018 9:35:00 PM
Lots of LOVE to you and your's John. I think He's making Himself known very strongly at this time in the world to many people, as well in my Life. He has always been with me, but more now than ever. He is always present and He does hear and answer conversations with Him. x
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/24/2018 6:46:00 PM
What a beautiful thought, Leanne, I never thought of it this way but He is with me at all times as well. I ask for His strength many times throughout the day. Bless you my friend.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/24/2018 5:47:00 PM
John that means so much not only to me, but the biggest and most important of all the angels...to me He is not only my Saviour, but my number one angel, who is constantly walking with me and discussing the pros and cons. Lots of love, to you and yours, Leanne.x
Date: 4/4/2018 9:38:00 PM
So beautiful in thought and images. I can feel the emotion. It is not easy to write a good poem about spiritual experience. Nicely done! Fave!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/4/2018 9:45:00 PM
Thank you Kim. Of course everyone is welcome to their personal beliefs. This is mine. This is how I see/feel it. The message this man gives is very strong, in my mind. In my mind, his death and his vision was not for ... nothing. In fact, one could question, is he really dead? This is my take on 'Communion' and I am sure I have been having it throughout my entire life, but more so of late. Glad you liked. x
Date: 4/1/2018 12:32:00 PM
This is a display of great and unique poetic talent, IMHO. Which always awes me since my own writings are geared more towards the experiences in my life and do not oft seek to display such color and emotion. You my friend, have a rare gift,methinks.. A fav...
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/1/2018 7:39:00 PM
Sending Joy and Peace to you and your family this Easter Robert. There are far better writers than myself here in these pages. The common denominator, is that we have been given a gift. A rather precious gift to be delivered with great forethought in mind. The gift you give through your writing should never be adlibbed. Perhaps one writes for an audience, then again perhaps it is a form of automatic writing a message to oneself...from your higher self, or perhaps even some higher power.Loved your trilogy - perhaps that is your best style/format. Keep writing from the heart, remain true to you. Just as the man I converse with in my poem "Communion" stayed and remains standing "True".
Date: 3/31/2018 10:40:00 AM
Very spiritual this lovely pointed poem be, Leanne. Another great write! Love and hugs.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/31/2018 5:31:00 PM
It is Easter Sunday here, it will still be Saturday night, in your part of the world. Sending you and your family wishes for joy and peace on this day and always. To one of my favourite poets in The Broth.
Date: 3/29/2018 9:38:00 PM
Hi Leanne, the singular poetic brilliance portrayed here is heavenly....the mutual dream sequence so creative! Much fun! Thank you!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/31/2018 2:17:00 AM
Best of Easter greetings and wishes to you and your family James. I have left some Easter Eggs under my poem. People can take them, or leave them as they wish. All very intriguing. Yes, it is amazing what communion we make and the conversations we have in our dreams, other dimensions entirely and what amazing ways the conversations take communion to a whole other level.
Date: 3/28/2018 3:14:00 AM
I like this one. And I believe that 'raw (if it was indeed raw) is good. Many wishes, Kai
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/28/2018 11:13:00 AM
Like many people writing in these pages, I am "raw" in so many ways. Most good writers are. Kai, you are ONE of the most original, very unique and intelligent writers I am reading here. Thank you for reading my words. Never change your style or conform to please the majority.All the best of wishes to you always. Leanne.
Date: 3/27/2018 2:19:00 PM
Nice...
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/27/2018 7:49:00 PM
Merci ...
Date: 3/26/2018 11:07:00 PM
what a writing! Awesome! your start is always vivid!! "You speak to me in tongues I hear you with my heart" "You touch... drug potent" this line i couldnt understand well.... :( "Like a drunk, I swallow all your delicious words" is so precious line. and as usual like frosted of yours ending is so awesome. again my fav one!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/27/2018 7:51:00 PM
Thank you Ashok.
Date: 3/26/2018 9:52:00 PM
Very beautiful write
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/27/2018 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Kishan.
Date: 3/26/2018 8:36:00 PM
Amazing creativity Leanne!! Great imagery as well.. Bravo!!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 3/27/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you Robertina.