Communication Or Solo

Excuse me sir can you help me
I'm not really sure where I am
I failed to notice your ear bud
Could I have a minute ma'am?

Ok then I'll wait till you're done
Lots of people but nobody home
Can I please get some directions
Is anyone not on their phone?

I know the phone is a wonder
For Internet or a phone call
But I wonder if, this wonder 
Is so wonderful after all!

Communication or solo
Just what age are we living in?
Well, if you can't join em go solo
So I guess I'll just Google it then!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 1/4/2018 11:20:00 PM
Well written! Anything not to be alone with thought.
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/5/2018 4:09:00 PM
Excellent point! Introspection kills I guess! Thank you for commenting Joe! Nice to know someone out there is actually reading these blurbs. (Rants??) Anyway have a great day!..pat
Date: 1/4/2018 4:37:00 PM
Fantastic Pat, I am so with you on this one! Regards and Happy New Year, Kevin
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Date: 1/4/2018 5:22:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by with the great comment!!!.........pat
Date: 1/4/2018 4:29:00 PM
This was adorable!. I just read this to my 22 yr. old and he thought it was great too!
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Date: 1/4/2018 5:21:00 PM
Doe's somewhat have the "ring" of truth I think....80)...Glad you liked it!.......................pat
Date: 1/4/2018 10:45:00 AM
I hear you!! Wonderful way to express this absolute annoyance. Well done, Pat
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Pat Adams
Date: 1/4/2018 3:10:00 PM
A double edged sword I'd say!....Thanks for commenting Line!...pat
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