Common Sense

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10/01/23

No. 1246 New Poem only.

Premiere Contest by Brian Strand.

COMMON  SENSE

            Common.                  Good guy.                If three
            sense ! Nil.                  tries to                   given :
            I.Q.                            do good,                 returns
            zero.                          but fails.                 just one.
                                              Good for                 If he
                                               nothing.               takes one,
                                                                          makes three
                                                                              at ease.
      
             Always                   Nature :                       Now  I
              joyful.                   Gentle 	                    admit
              Never                    I can't                         Hard fact 
              angry.                    object.                        as shown:
             But can't                 He acts                         Common 
              correct                   too smooth.                 Sense ! Not
               any                         dauntless.                  that much
              mistake.                 Tough truth.                  common
                                                                                amongst
                                                                                  people.

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Silent One

Date: 10/1/2023 10:57:00 AM

You did these very well dear Anisha..

Anisha Dutta
Date: 10/1/2023 8:10:00 PM

Thanks and Blessing. I am too happy as you are back to participate. Blessings.