Commodes Delight

All dressed in white 
In hopes I might be out of everyone's sight
I will fight for what is right
As long as others wont miss their targets sight
For one will feel more delight 
When they are relieved of their painfull plight 
And end up closing my commodes lid tight
And washes their hands with sheer delight
Before clearly leaving my commode's chair sight 



Wash Those Hands LOL


Also Entry For
Matt Caliri's 
Speak Chair Speak Contest
GL All
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 4:52 PM
Different idea here that should get a laugh and a place. Keep those creative thoughts flowing onto paper. Sara
Loving Iii Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 10:45 AM
i keep my comment to my self. jhl
Brown Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 4:45 AM
Wonderful poetry you present to us today Katherine. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol
Strand Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 3:11 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Katherine .Rgds Brian
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November 23, 2009 at 3:16 PM
LOL - Great take on a different type of "chair" for Matt's contest, Katherine. He threw down the gauntlet and poets like you have been delivering some gems. I'd sure hate to have to judge that contest! Good luck. Love, Carolyn
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