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Life goes by fast Don’t take it too slow Commitments made and met Help us flourish and grow

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Date: 6/3/2022 6:41:00 AM
'made and met' the critical words. well penned Gershon Hugs, Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/2/2022 3:54:00 PM
So when you commit, it slows down time, especially if you place it all in a rhyme! Very true at our house, Gershon! Commitment rules…and lasts! Hugs, sally
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Date: 6/2/2022 8:38:00 PM
Sounds like you're committed to running a disciplined home, Sally.
Date: 6/2/2022 1:18:00 PM
Wow, that's incredible poetry you wrote, Gershon. Although it is brief, it communicates a number of ideas that might fill the pages of several volumes.
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Date: 6/2/2022 8:35:00 PM
That's why we call it 'poetry' - 'economy of language!' ~ Frue Gull
Date: 6/2/2022 12:06:00 PM
Gershon, your short rhyme reveals a tome of life lessons. :)Paulette
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Date: 6/2/2022 8:15:00 PM
A 'tome!' Wow. Hadn't heard that word for at least a week or two. (Showing my youth again). ~ Whip Her Snapper
Date: 6/2/2022 11:24:00 AM
Indeed, they do, gw. Indeed they do, especially if they are kept.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/2/2022 8:09:00 PM
I commit to finishing this reply right now. ~ The End! (That's all Folks! :) Bugs B.
Date: 6/2/2022 10:40:00 AM
A poetic way to say 'Let's getter done' Your poem is much better I think. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/2/2022 8:01:00 PM
I think 'Let's getter done' is shorter and sweeter, Kenneth. Hats off to you! ~ Oops, where's my wig?!

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