Commencement

They laughed at one another 
as they threw their mortar boards aloft, 
and dared to kiss the girl goodbye, 
though she had spurned them 
in the dry years underneath the towers, 
Now boys no more, and war much brighter 
than their lust for adolescent loveliness, 
the bus and train will take them to a new domain 
where pleasure girls will lie for them, 
compressed in six short weekends hence, 
until possessed with skill to kill, men pack their gear 
to fly across the globe and die in puzzlement, 
identified, and boxed and neatly laid 
to rest beneath a cool and restless shade. 
                    ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Austin Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 12:38 PM
"Uncle Sam wants you!" I shuddered at the sign all through junior high, this is, like, 1944. I worked at Lowry Field in Denver, delivering photos to the base photo studio from downtown. Half the photos were of G.I.s who went down in a friggin B-17, or 24 over Germany. What a God awful waste I thought, even at that tender age. I made it to commencement 1947. Thanks to the worst horror in history - the atomic bomb. daver
Puddifoot Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 3:35 PM
exquisite writing, sweet man, and YES I understand it! I like your use of rhyme within the free verse, both internal and end rhyme (I love internal rhyme) :-) (don't forget to check soup mail!)
Ludden Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 4:04 PM
Thank you. Yes, I employ intermal rhyme quite often even though many will not detect it. (I knew you would). I'm sure you noted the double entendre for "lie" as well. :-) -Dean
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