Coming Over the Open Horizon

Coming over the open horizon 
     My eyes prospect the garish cliffs of day
     And find not gold in the morning light
               By sorrow sifted away.
       But there and there across each state
              The subtle sun of spring
            A new crop harrowing brings
      Into view ... and crows cawing to devour 
      
       The contentless cases of crumbled minds
           Tent cities, like old cotton bales
           Tent cities, like cold rotten tales
            Of gypsy curses bringing here
           Retributions of brambled despair
              And I panning through tears
             Turned away from the condition
 That was for my history the predetrmined condition
            But I could not shake the thought
              Of butterflies by spiders caught.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 10, 2009 at 1:07 AM
Excellent work L'nass,like thye alliteration .Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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