Coming of Age On a Tiny Isle

coming of age on a tiny isle

my father reached out his hand to me and took my bag of marbles including my hand made "shooter" of red river clay hardened by fire and ground to roundness against a flat grainy rock
near perfect 
at least to me
even though it wobbled a bit in it's travels to capture the prize from Jeffy
my friend
my enemy
"it's time" was all my father said to me on my first day of being eight years old
my childhood was over
the old boat needed patching
fish needed scaling and gutting
shrimp needed to be shelled and cleaned
summer had started and the few people with money
shambled up to buy the daily catch
wrapped in paper

on this tiny island
this small sliver of sand and scrub
stood three shacks lived in for four generations
the mainland shimmered in the near distance and we knew that my father's calling would be the last of his kind
the far rich shore beckons to me 
and someday soon...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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February 26, 2018 at 11:44 AM
I had read a couple times, which should be for a poem. Poems should be like puzzles. I understand it now. The growing. The leaving behind. The sadness. I love your style and would like to learn from you.
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