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Coming Home For Christmas

 
Twas the night before Christmas before I got home, it took a train, bus, and taxi in falling snow; and how that bus on the road did sway and roam, while the wild snow and wind did howl, roar and blow. It began in northern Ontario on a train, and it was wonderful gliding through forests frozen; then, onto a bus that wandered from lane to lane, my wish to get home for Christmas seemed ill-chosen. Then, somehow we arrived to my city in an icy snowstorm, slipping and sliding- I ventured outside snow blind; and got a taxi with a driver that was barely a life form, but, when I saw home such lovely thoughts twined. The driveway was a hill- now all ice and snow covered, I started up and would just slip back down again and again; so, crawling on my knees was the best way I discovered, finally, I made it to the porch and front door- amen. I entered like I had walked all the way from the north, so, cold I shivered for an hour in front of the fire place; but, I made it and how happy was my mom's face, we kissed again, again and again- back and forth. ________________________ December 04, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/Coming Home For Christmas Copyright Protected, ID 12-1506-612-04 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, The Night Before 3 sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 12/23/2022 First Place
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May Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 6:17 AM
Making it home no matter the weather, Lovely story Constance, Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned, Merry Christmas
La France Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 2:22 PM
Joseph, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my wonderful placement, and the compliment and congrats, appreciate, blessings
Alex Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Great experience. Happy end. Beautiful. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings
Volumes Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 8:30 AM
Such a nice story. Enjoyed. All the best for Christmas Constance.
La France Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Wendy, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, blessings
Cunningham Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 12:56 PM
It was a worthwhile journey to get home to be reunited with loved ones for the holiday season, a bit of snow wasn't going to stop you. Best of luck Constance, have a great week ahead. Tom
La France Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 6:06 PM
Tom, thank you so much for the visit and comment, I will never forget that trip home for Christmas, I really thought I was not going to make it, but seeing my mom's face made it worthwhile, blessings
Hankins Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 8:19 AM
Such a beautiful picture of coming home for Christmas, Constance. Was it a surprise visit? Well, I suppose it was, in a storm like that.
La France Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 6:09 PM
Milt, thank you so much for the compliment. I was working up north and had told my family that I could not make it home for Christmas, then changed my mind and thus the journey because that was the only place I wanted to be at Christmas, blessings
Daniel Avatar
December 4, 2022 at 11:03 PM
Beautiful poem, Constance:)
La France Avatar
December 5, 2022 at 1:43 AM
Jo, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, blessings
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