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Coming Back Home

C —coming back home, for one final time O—only thing left to do, lay here I’m dying M—my family round me, say their prayers I—-i’m heavily medicated, tenuously aware N—no more pain, just conscious illusions G—gravitas sinks in, along with confusion B—breathing is shallow, gasping for breath A—as night closes in, to accompany death C—can hear them say, dear god he’s going K—kisses on my forehead, faintly growing H—holding hands, helps bear the weight O—overwhelmed in love, there is no hate M—my life flashing past, I’m a child again E—each frame’s forever, it’s snowing! amen. Coming back home contest Sponsored by John Hamilton 06/03/2021

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Date: 3/10/2021 6:19:00 PM
Congratulations! Well done! Well earned
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/11/2021 1:57:00 AM
Thanks Caren, I’m delighted to get a placement, cheers David
Date: 3/8/2021 8:37:00 AM
David, congratulations in John's contest with this Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2021 8:41:00 AM
Heya Constance, thank you for calling in with congrats, cheers David
Date: 3/8/2021 8:11:00 AM
Chilling but uplifting write David. Congratulations! Linda
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2021 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Linda, who knows that last second may last forever, cheers David
Date: 3/7/2021 1:26:00 PM
Hi David, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/7/2021 1:29:00 PM
I was the last entry Alexis, sneaked in the back door, thank you so much, cheers David
Date: 3/7/2021 1:20:00 PM
many congrats on your win David:-) I didnt have time to even write for the contest:-( hugs Jan xx
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/7/2021 1:33:00 PM
That’s a pity sometimes the entry’s do fill pretty quick, Thanks Jan, I was the last entry, so delighted to get a placement, cheers David
Date: 3/7/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thanks for your entry, congrats on placing David!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 3/7/2021 12:43:00 PM
Thank you John, I’m delighted to get a placement in your contest, cheers David

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