Coming Back Home

C —coming back home, for one final time
O—only thing left to do, lay here I’m dying 
M—my family round me, say their prayers 
I—-i’m heavily medicated, tenuously aware
N—no more pain, just conscious illusions
G—gravitas sinks in, along with confusion 
B—breathing is shallow, gasping for breath 
A—as night closes in, to accompany death 
C—can hear them say, dear god he’s going 
K—kisses on my forehead, faintly growing 
H—holding hands, helps bear the weight 
O—overwhelmed in love, there is no hate
M—my life flashing past, I’m a child again 
E—each frame’s forever, it’s snowing! amen. 


 Coming back home contest
Sponsored by John Hamilton 
06/03/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 6:19 PM
Congratulations! Well done! Well earned
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 1:57 AM
Thanks Caren, I’m delighted to get a placement, cheers David
La France Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 8:37 AM
David, congratulations in John's contest with this Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Heya Constance, thank you for calling in with congrats, cheers David
Fowler Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Chilling but uplifting write David. Congratulations! Linda
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Thank you Linda, who knows that last second may last forever, cheers David
Y. Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 1:26 PM
Hi David, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 1:29 PM
I was the last entry Alexis, sneaked in the back door, thank you so much, cheers David
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 1:20 PM
many congrats on your win David:-) I didnt have time to even write for the contest:-( hugs Jan xx
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 1:33 PM
That’s a pity sometimes the entry’s do fill pretty quick, Thanks Jan, I was the last entry, so delighted to get a placement, cheers David
Hamilton Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Thanks for your entry, congrats on placing David!
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 12:43 PM
Thank you John, I’m delighted to get a placement in your contest, cheers David
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