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Coming Back Home

Can I return to you? Oh, can I please? Only you, Darling, make me feel alive. My heart keeps yearning. I feel such unease In this new place. All I do is survive! Nothing compares to what I had with you. Great loneliness encompasses my soul. By my side, Dear, do you want to be too? A year has passed, and I cannot feel whole. Crazy! I was crazy to ever leave. Keeping sane is hard. My mind’s careening. Heaven is you with me. That I believe! Of home and your caresses I’m dreaming. My love, please say you also long for me. Endless love I pledge! With you I’ll soon be. Feb. 23, 2021 for John Hamilton's Coming Back Home Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/8/2021 3:59:00 PM
let's hope all ends well! congrats on your win in the acrostic contest :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/8/2021 4:01:00 PM
just made up stuff, charlotte! How are you doing?
Date: 3/8/2021 8:28:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/7/2021 1:08:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/7/2021 12:02:00 PM
Nice write Andrea, congrats on a win in my contest!
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Date: 2/26/2021 8:17:00 PM
Oh wow Andrea! This poems makes me feel sadness and longing along with you. That’s what good poetry does. Great job!
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Date: 2/26/2021 3:52:00 AM
Beautiful Acrostic Andrea... Home is the best. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 2/24/2021 4:58:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, This is a good entry for contender for the contest. If it was a long love like it think it was, they will welcome you with open arms. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/24/2021 5:46:00 AM
This longing is heartfelt--quite an emotive write, Andrea.
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Date: 2/23/2021 10:50:00 PM
After a year, I doubt he cares any more, but hopefully he might change his mind. ~~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/24/2021 4:09:00 PM
I was writing as if I were a man. haha. (however, I hear of women that leave their men too!)
Date: 2/23/2021 2:58:00 PM
A beautifully done Acrostic Andrea. Brings to mind one who left home to make a new beginning in a new place and found that home is where the heart is. Great job. God Bless, JB
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