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C an never get home fast enough whenever I’m away O nly thoughts of my return will get me through another day M eanwhile I meander even though my heart’s not in it I visualize your beauty and I ‘m missing you each minute N othing can replace you for you are a tour de force G oing back and forth your moods can change and that of course B ecomes the part I love ~ never knowing who you'll be A lways someone different I am loving your transparency C olours blue enhance your hue ~ agate, sapphire and royal blue K ids with kites and dogs with balls and folks who disrespect you H ave seen your strength and anger standing back in awe to view you O n days like these they hear your roar and see your own white horses M y love for you I can't contain you reach inside my soul E ach day I walk beside you ~ the Sea and me ~ my heart you stole Written by a true Piscean who loves the Sea ~ 18th February 2021 Contest Coming Back Home Sponsor John Hamilton 3rd place Contest ALL YOURS (Mar 9) Sponsor Brian Strand N/A

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Date: 3/8/2021 8:29:00 AM
Ann, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/12/2021 1:42:00 PM
Oh bless you dear Constance for you kind words, I really appreciate you visit and thank you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/7/2021 1:09:00 PM
Hi Ann, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/12/2021 1:41:00 PM
Thank you dear Alexis for your lovely comments and congratulations. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/7/2021 12:03:00 PM
Such a nice write Ann enjoyed, congrats on a win!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/12/2021 1:40:00 PM
Thank you so much John for my win in your contest. I really enjoyed writing my poem and so glad you enjoyed it too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/17/2021 10:43:00 PM
What a lovely romantic write, Ann. Great characterisation. Best for a win. ~~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/18/2021 2:45:00 PM
Oh bless you dearest Victor and many thanks. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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