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Coming Back Home

Can't go home again? I hope that will not prove true Open arms will be welcoming; helping me pull through My heart was betrayed after I left. Now, I'm on my own Insecure and all alone; I'm lost and tossed... windblown Numbed by grief, I'll find relief among family and friends Grateful to journey back home, where my path wends. Being around familiar things will heal my wounded heart And I'll weave closed tattered seams that were split apart Chasing a dream was a mistake I'll never risk taking again Knowing my emotions were torn asunder. I loved in vain Home is a haven where I will find solace in each embrace Oasis in the desert of my pain; my roots... my birthplace May I never forget this time of homecoming while I grieve Exclaiming my thanks for the loving support I will receive February 13, 2021 Coming Back Home Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 3/8/2021 3:22:00 PM
The healing hearth of home is wonderfully encapsulated in your acrostic of vivid images and wonderful, flowing rhymes. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/8/2021 8:25:00 AM
Jenna, congratulations in John's contest with this wonderful Acrostic poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/7/2021 12:53:00 PM
Hi Jenna, Congratulations on your winning write this well-written and heartfelt write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2021 8:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis.
Date: 3/7/2021 11:46:00 AM
An emotional return is felt, congrats Jenna on a wonderful entry and win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2021 8:03:00 AM
John, thanks for honoring my Acrostic in your contest.
Date: 2/26/2021 9:00:00 AM
A brilliant acrostic Jenna, and a lovely story - how wonderful to be going back home where loving support will be received. I can imagine how emotional this person feels. Hope this is a win. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/7/2021 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so very much for such wonderful comments, Jennifer. Somehow I missed them until now. It was a truth I lived.
Date: 2/18/2021 3:14:00 PM
Really wonderful, Jenna:-) I think you have a top winner on your hands here!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/19/2021 4:18:00 AM
Thank you for being supportive, Edward. I always enjoy the challenge of Acrostic form.
Date: 2/14/2021 2:24:00 AM
Wonderful write. God bless you dear lady, with love and prayers, Gina
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/14/2021 5:40:00 AM
Thanks so very much, Gina. I appreciate the many times you've read my poetry and left such kind remarks.
Date: 2/14/2021 1:45:00 AM
Excellent acrostic. So full of emotions. ~~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/14/2021 5:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Victor. The emotions were based on memories.
Date: 2/13/2021 4:58:00 PM
a heartfelt piece Jenna i could picture his return so clearly and the joy at him being home and welcomed with open arms:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/14/2021 5:39:00 AM
It was not so much of a chore for me to envision the scenario. It was a 'been there-done that' memory. Thank you an awful lot, Jan.

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