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Coming Back Home

City, after city fades One more night dreaming of home Morning arrives and my weeping cascades I am tired of this journey and my solitary roam Now, I realize how much I love you Gathering my strength I pray our love is still true Beautiful memories of us come out of the blue And I wander the crowded streets cold to the bone Can you wait for me I am coming home, I groan Keep sending you messages, oh I am so alone Hoping and praying to the Lord above Oh wait, I will be home soon my love My heart is weary but also full of joy Eager to see you- worried love I did not destroy __________________________ February 9, 2021 Poetry/Rhyming Acrostic/COMING BACK HOME Copyright Protected, ID 02-1327-299-09 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Inspiration - Michael Buble's song Home Written for the Standard contest, COMING BACK HOME sponsor, John Hamilton, Judged 03/07/2021 Third Place

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/8/2021 4:05:00 PM

romantic seamless acrostic - congrats on your win in the contest! :)

Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2021 5:55:00 AM

Charlotte, thanks for the compliment and for the congrats, appreciate a lot _Constance

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/8/2021 11:00:00 AM

You capture so well the fear we have when we've been away and wonder if the loved one left at home still wants us. Beautifully written, my friend! Congratulations on your win in John's contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2021 5:56:00 AM

Carolyn, thank you for the lovely comment and for the congratulations, so appreciated _Constance

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/8/2021 8:48:00 AM

Heya Constance, Barely noticeable acrostic form, which makes this all the better, seamlessly written, congratulations on high placement, cheers David

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2021 10:38:00 AM

David, thank you for the nice comment and for the congratulations _Constance

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/7/2021 1:06:00 PM

Hi BW, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2021 8:46:00 AM

Alexis, thanks for the congratulations _Constance

John Hamilton

Date: 3/7/2021 12:01:00 PM

Very nice writing Constance enjoyed, congrats on a nice win!

Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2021 8:47:00 AM

John, thank you for the contest and my placement and the compliment and congratulations, appreciate _Constance