Comin' Through

Comin’ Through


They stand there
monuments to stupidity
blocking progress,
denying access
or egress
to the doorways
corridors
checkout lines
coffee pots
of life


JUST STANDING THERE
totally enamored of themselves -
the urgency of their idle chit-chat.

Suffering from auricular atrophy
unable to hear anything but their own voices,
immune to common courtesy
looking at me as if “I HAVE A NERVE”
disrupting their insensitivity by requesting
“PERMISSION TO PASS THROUGH”
this huddle of hubristic pomposity.

They are masters of the “HARRUMPHHH” face
a look designed to make the dog pee,
the cat bristle and slink away,
me know that I have offended
the sensitivities of the insensitive
ruffled the feathers of the featherless
dared to insert a comma into their run on existence.



John G. Lawless
8/1/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 2:56 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
Lawless Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Thanks Sara, always nice to hear from you
Ward Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 7:03 AM
I identify with your frustration, john. Well done in the contest. Julia, xx
Lawless Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 7:10 AM
Thanks Julia, I sometimes mutter as I squeeze past...."does dinner come with this lovely intimacy"....I don't linger awaiting a response....
Ryerson Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 6:02 AM
I have come close to committing numerous acts of violence in such situations John...Congratulations sir! - Tim
Lawless Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 7:08 AM
TIM, you're old enough to remember when "older" women used "hat pins"....Well--Grandma Kelly was reputed to have used them for some nefarious purposes.....
A. Sharma Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 1:06 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem John! Great work!
Roper Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 10:49 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7:~),what my mother in-law in those upcoming situations she'd pretend she accidently ran into them and say sorry I wasn't looking . They'd just give her a dirty look and let her through. Hugs Eve
Lawless Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 7:06 AM
It's nice to know that your mother-in-law has a few "power forward" post moves. Thanks for the high mark.....TOUCHDOWN/extra point--GOOD
A  Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 9:58 PM
John, Congrats in Mary's contest. **
La France Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 1:34 PM
John this is an excellent free verse, deep and intense and so well penned, a fantastic 7
Lawless Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 7:02 AM
Thanks BW. Sometimes I wish that the sand in the hourglass had this problem....but it just keeps moving easily past. Appreciate the high mark.
Jones Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 8:37 AM
Absolutely brilliant and a running commentary on my daily public life. Brilliant. Kind regards, Ian
Jones Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 7:34 AM
That's ok John. I'not exactly the Silver Streak myself. I've lost count of how many times I've tried to access Pottery Soup! Kind regards, Ian
Lawless Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 7:00 AM
Ian, I'm a little behind in my replys. Thanks for waiting at the door while I dawdled.
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