Comin' Through

Comin’ Through


They stand there
monuments to stupidity
blocking progress,
denying access
or egress
to the doorways
corridors
checkout lines
coffee pots
of life


JUST STANDING THERE
totally enamored of themselves -
the urgency of their idle chit-chat.

Suffering from auricular atrophy
unable to hear anything but their own voices,
immune to common courtesy
looking at me as if “I HAVE A NERVE”
disrupting their insensitivity by requesting
“PERMISSION TO PASS THROUGH”
this huddle of hubristic pomposity.

They are masters of the “HARRUMPHHH” face
a look designed to make the dog pee,
the cat bristle and slink away,
me know that I have offended
the sensitivities of the insensitive
ruffled the feathers of the featherless
dared to insert a comma into their run on existence.



John G. Lawless
8/1/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/13/2015 2:56:00 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:11:00 AM
Thanks Sara, always nice to hear from you
Date: 8/13/2015 7:03:00 AM
I identify with your frustration, john. Well done in the contest. Julia, xx
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Julia, I sometimes mutter as I squeeze past...."does dinner come with this lovely intimacy"....I don't linger awaiting a response....
Date: 8/11/2015 6:02:00 AM
I have come close to committing numerous acts of violence in such situations John...Congratulations sir! - Tim
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:08:00 AM
TIM, you're old enough to remember when "older" women used "hat pins"....Well--Grandma Kelly was reputed to have used them for some nefarious purposes.....
Date: 8/10/2015 1:06:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem John! Great work!
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Date: 8/8/2015 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7:~),what my mother in-law in those upcoming situations she'd pretend she accidently ran into them and say sorry I wasn't looking . They'd just give her a dirty look and let her through. Hugs Eve
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:06:00 AM
It's nice to know that your mother-in-law has a few "power forward" post moves. Thanks for the high mark.....TOUCHDOWN/extra point--GOOD
Date: 8/8/2015 9:58:00 PM
John, Congrats in Mary's contest. **
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Date: 8/3/2015 1:34:00 PM
John this is an excellent free verse, deep and intense and so well penned, a fantastic 7
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:02:00 AM
Thanks BW. Sometimes I wish that the sand in the hourglass had this problem....but it just keeps moving easily past. Appreciate the high mark.
Date: 8/1/2015 8:37:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant and a running commentary on my daily public life. Brilliant. Kind regards, Ian
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Ian Jones
Date: 8/14/2015 7:34:00 AM
That's ok John. I'not exactly the Silver Streak myself. I've lost count of how many times I've tried to access Pottery Soup! Kind regards, Ian
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:00:00 AM
Ian, I'm a little behind in my replys. Thanks for waiting at the door while I dawdled.
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