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Comfort Zone

Where the river turns through mountains ravine, The answers are found to what is serene Where the cliffs climb up on the mountain’s side, Water trickles down, the slate rocky slide Faces are seen in reflections below In the moving ripples of water’s flow Nature’s pictures are drawn on rocks nearby When the waterfalls choose not to be shy The pine needles soften each step to shore On a walk ever reaching so much more The wildlife is busy with their play Running around in their world for the day This all offers the mind a home to be Calm in its comfort zone, under a tree Heidi Sands 3/23/19

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/30/2019 10:46:00 AM

Peaceful, calming, the gifts of nature. And you are so right, they are all around you. Lovely, Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2019 12:27:00 PM

Thank you for you kind comment Sandy. Yes, the peaceful gifts of nature :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2019 6:39:00 AM

heidi...yes, trees bring much comfort to an otherwise frazzled world...elegant sonnet from your gold pen!...huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/24/2019 6:54:00 AM

Thank you very much Nette. Have a nice day :)

Silent One

Date: 3/24/2019 6:32:00 AM

A lovely sonnet, sounds so lovely.. great imagery Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/24/2019 6:54:00 AM

Thank you Silent One :) Have a nice day!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/23/2019 9:02:00 PM

Heidi, there was a subtle bit of personification in this also, which added to her loveliness. "Nature’s pictures are drawn on rocks nearby When the waterfalls choose not to be shy"

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/23/2019 9:09:00 PM

Thank you Caren I do enjoy personification, although haven't done any lately. Earlier on posted one called , I the Ocean. :)