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Comfort Me Oh Black Shamballa

Comfort Me Oh Black Shamballa

For all the 'ninth nights' I can't attend
Let me moan, caress you, cry and mend
Friends, colleagues gone that way
Funerals converge same same day
 
Too many murders too many cancers
Hearts give out and brains can't answer
Comfort me oh black shamballa
'Llow me to fidget while I twist 'n holla
 
Sweet flight Calm seas Men of honour
We'll meet again in fair land up yonder.

absencebereavementcancerdeath ofalliteration

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Beata Agustin

October 21, 2024 at 8:52 PM

I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Kenneth R. Jenkins

February 21, 2018 at 1:34 AM

Very interest write poet. Keep the pen wet.......

Stephan McBride

July 19, 2016 at 12:28 AM

awesome I love it

Sandra Wiggan

July 20, 2016 at 9:18 PM

I appreciate this!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 10, 2016 at 7:43 AM

- I enjoy reading your first poem, you write great Sandra :) - Warm welcome to Poetry - Soup :) - hugs // Sun :)

Sandra Wiggan

July 20, 2016 at 9:18 PM

Thanks a mil!

Poet Destroyer A

July 9, 2016 at 12:05 PM

Sandra,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Sandra Wiggan

July 20, 2016 at 9:19 PM

Your note is lovely and well appreciated! Thanks.

Skat A

July 8, 2016 at 12:57 PM

enjoyed your write Sandra, thank you for sharing:), **LUV SKAT**

Sandra Wiggan

July 20, 2016 at 9:19 PM

Bless.

Sandra Wiggan

July 7, 2016 at 6:44 PM

I am thrilled at the feedback for my first poem. This is very encouraging and to think I didn't even know the category for this listing!

Skat A

July 7, 2016 at 5:14 PM

Sandra, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Sandra Wiggan

July 20, 2016 at 9:21 PM

I can't believe the feedback for my first little poem! Thanks and I look forward to learning and growing.

Comfort Me Oh Black Shamballa

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