Comfort

Reaching gently, touch the water, soft flow of peace on my fingers,
      bending low to look deep to the bottom, crystal clear,
             rocks look like their moving
Gurgling sound comforts my soul,  sunshine warms my skin, releaves strain,
Rushed thoughts pass away, I begin to rest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Wood Avatar
October 8, 2008 at 9:25 AM
I like your style. This is simply beautiful.
Zahed Avatar
September 30, 2008 at 11:29 AM
You descripe nature's care and love in a very pure and peaceful way...Indeed you showed us how nature fills us with "high" spirits where it makes you want to fly and refreshes your mind. Well written...Sara...
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