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“Children begin by loving their parents; as they grow older they judge them; sometimes they forgive them.”
Quote by _Oscar Wilde
Cometh Forgiveness Day
We arrive on earth innocent and pure To arms of our parents feeling secure For some that security disappears When loving feelings are replaced by fear. Most mothers are angels throughout their days Showering their children with love always Some moms have to put up and hush up too That's what horrid controlling freaks can do. When households are unbelievably strict It is terrifying for to exist Frightened to speak or to step out of line Causing an explosion at anytime. Life is what it is, some don’t have a choice No one knows, therefore there is no advice It holds one back, life is no fun for some In family homes held beneath the thumb. Never knowing what it is to fly free Children who’re afraid to speak with free speech No outings with friends, enjoying some fun Trampled upon since their life had begun. Yet out of the gloom some flourish and grow Doing well at school surprisingly so Learning how to love and to relish life Determined are they to put their world right. Say goodbye to sorrow, love wins o’er all Yet often memories will be recalled Though it can be arduous to forgive Bury away pain in a soulful dig. Shackles that chain the heart will fall away The instant cometh one’s forgiveness day. *+*+*+* 31st May 2023 Writing Challenge - C Quotes - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 6/19/2023 8:56:00 AM
If only everyday could be forgiveness day - lovely write Belle. Belated congrats! :)
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Date: 6/6/2023 5:21:00 AM
- Sometimes they forgive them ... but, not always ... sad when it happens ... a beautiful poem, Belle - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 6/6/2023 4:11:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
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Date: 6/4/2023 1:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in the Contest ...Belle. Love always wins.. Nice poem.
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Date: 6/3/2023 8:23:00 PM
"Life is what it is, some don’t have a choice No one knows, therefore there is no advice It holds one back, life is no fun for some" - A truth beautifully said. A great poem, indeed, Congratulations!
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Date: 6/3/2023 6:52:00 PM
Belle, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/3/2023 7:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Constance, your contests are motivational as they lure the muse into action… Belle
Date: 6/3/2023 10:52:00 AM
Forget not to forgive; is what I take from this Gracefull and reflective Belle, I wish you well In the contest '
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/3/2023 12:16:00 PM
Thank you Joe, I’ve had to forgive many times in my life, haven’t we all, yet I’ve done and said things I’ve lived to regret and hope that I’ve been forgiven too. Forgiving takes the blight out of life, it’s good for the soul… Belle
Date: 6/1/2023 1:10:00 PM
I just read what you commented to me under my own poem on this similar theme. Yes, I get you for sure!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/1/2023 1:51:00 PM
Thank you and bless you Andrea… Belle
Date: 6/1/2023 1:06:00 PM
You mentioned your mother was always an angel and yet you had a terrible childhood. Was it because of a scary father? I see lots of documentaries on wives and kids who must endure such abuse as kids. Sorry it happened to you. Great job with the poem.
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Date: 6/1/2023 3:08:00 AM
Well done for love and forgiveness, both towards others and to our own selves. A beautiful poem.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/1/2023 11:57:00 AM
Thank you Victor, forgiving is good for one’s spirit, holding ill feelings deters healing…. Belle
Date: 5/31/2023 8:47:00 PM
I'm glad the positive emotions of love and forgiveness, helped you to overcome the darkness in your past, Belle. Lovely poem. :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/1/2023 2:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Evelyn, I understand people do bad things for sad reasons and I’d forgive anyone for that… Belle
Date: 5/31/2023 6:55:00 PM
Wow! Belle, You did a good with the quote you chose. I hate to hear you with through that as a child. I had my own trauma as a kid. Thank goodness you were blessed with your prince charming. It's good you were able to forgive. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening-Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/31/2023 7:08:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, there’s times I have to forgive myself, I’m not perfect and have the odd slip and then beat myself up about it, it’s not often and I always apologise and try my best to always be kind… Belle
Date: 5/31/2023 8:03:00 AM
In a masterful display of poetic prowess, you depicted your formative years with exquisite rhyme and fluidity. Though it may be difficult, forgiveness is essential for both our physical and emotional well-being. While the memories of our past may linger, forgiveness lightens their burden and prevents them from consuming us with overwhelming emotion. Good luck with the contest, dear Belle.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/31/2023 8:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Sotto, forgiveness as you say is essential for our emotional well being and inner happiness. Blessings dear poet friend… Belle
Date: 5/31/2023 7:08:00 AM
I can relate to much of that yet i never lament the parental restrictions, discipline and supervision imposed by my mother for they were really beneficial in a crazy unpredictable world where evil lurks. You presented your childhood in superbly done splendid rhyming and flow wow. Kudos!! >>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<< Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/31/2023 8:29:00 AM
Thank you S.zaynab, discipline I agree is something children need, done in a kind loving way. When it becomes apparently abusive it’s wrong and does nothing but emotional harm. I will go and read your new poem… Belle
Date: 5/31/2023 4:40:00 AM
Ahh!! Forgiving is not easy but is best for our health both physical and emotional. We will always have those memories but with forgiveness they are not as heavy with emotion that destroys us. This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/31/2023 6:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara, forgiving is good for the soul, helping one to forget the pains of old. Blessings, Belle

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