Comes the Night

Comes the night with a residual rampant roar
As the shadows swallow the remaining light
For death documents it final scurrilous score
And breaths are barred from taking flight

Sequestered sight with a vanishing view
The sandman serves his final daunting dream
Vanquishing vaporous veils are long overdue
A sabbatical sleep thru a scriptural stream

In paralytic phantom plight of nevermore
The sky cascades with a galling guilted gray
The soul journeys thru a celestial shore
As we float fallaciously on such a winters day.


April.25.2017

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Date: 6/3/2017 6:05:00 AM
Hey WW, a fascinating poem :) enjoyed the play of sounds :)
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Date: 5/28/2017 8:50:00 PM
I have enjoyed this wonderful poem.
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Date: 5/6/2017 9:20:00 PM
Congrats WW on a well deserved win, I understood this one!!yay
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Date: 4/29/2017 7:58:00 AM
WW, such an amazing imagery of death that presents the soul's mystical journey to the celestial shore. Your alliterations reinforce the power of your poem. Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win. 7 and Fav, Sandra
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Sandra...^WW^
Date: 4/28/2017 10:10:00 PM
Great write and win ..Congrats
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Joseph...^WW^
Date: 4/28/2017 8:42:00 PM
what wonderful use of sounds in this poetry, Winged Warrior. Congrats on a well deserved win
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...^WW^
Date: 4/28/2017 10:21:00 AM
A valid victory WW, congratulations...
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Charlie...^WW^
Date: 4/28/2017 10:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Love how you use the alliterations.
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Agnes...^WW^
Date: 4/28/2017 9:45:00 AM
Congrats, WW! lovely final line!
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Kim...^WW^
Date: 4/28/2017 8:07:00 AM
Congrats on your win, WW! Well-deserved
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:53:00 AM
Thank you White Wolf...^WW^
Date: 4/25/2017 11:33:00 AM
what living energy this poem exudes, WW.. very finely done.. huggs
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:53:00 AM
Thank you Nette...^WW^
Date: 4/25/2017 12:55:00 AM
This is a very impressive pen, my friend! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this today! GL
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:52:00 AM
Thank you Wolfie...^WW^
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