Comes the End

nothing but black now sun god turned his back on earth death comes in the dark... Its cold, my heart cold No moon, no stars, no comfort how will I know the end... water round my feet hold out my hands to nothing remembering warmth...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Onclaud Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 9:11 PM
congrats on your shining award, barbara!...huggs!
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 1:18 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Gail's "Armageddon" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
Merryman Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 9:48 AM
Stark emotional imagery. Well done. Congrats on your win, Barbara! Love, Kim
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 7:42 PM
Barbara, this is one that really stands out for me!! Congrats on your win.
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