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Come With Me, To New Perceptions, Better Late Than Never

break through write splattered on this page you don't notice it now inbetween words like skies bleeding pink sealing ships how the sand bit their lips before the streams run distances anything to say, "notice me" a fad of today what will be left fallen changing tides idea man all for you I didn't see this coming, sorrow put my hands in my head but obviously you did, emergency exit stage left under your thumb again green winter mint cool ocean breeze what it was supposed to be it remained innocent never truly knew what it meant habitually finger pointed at follow your heart to redefine your spirit focuslesness forming on the next goal the gold to carve deceptions out of, sidetracked for the false idols answers we keep repeating but misunderstanding til we get it, familiar mistakes seems like the only message the answer our truth the one truth the happines we find the wrath of the healing that remains of our ignorance of being selfish come with me but be wary and look this way and that question intentions know intentions contorted and distorted squeaky clean doesnt exist room full of mirrors to understand the beauty of our reflection to his all I see is the film and dust on the memories of what I am I get wrapped up in me forgetting the extension of the meories i make in the we and us i keep forgetting exists

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Date: 1/2/2010 3:54:00 PM
Rather confusing but deep write. Squeaky clean definitely does not exist, but the media will distort the truth. We should never compare ourselves to their perceptions of right. Vince
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Date: 12/25/2009 8:08:00 PM
Imaginative write, and one I enjoyed reading. Do use spell check and capitalize words where required. Such as ( i ) I. I like your style as well but these simple things become a distraction to the reader.
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Date: 12/25/2009 4:35:00 PM
Neat, i really like your style. do spell check though.. lol..
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