Come To Me

From my heart rises an incessant cry
Like a stormy wind gaining in force and fury
With every passing moment, 	
It becomes a tumultuous roar
“I want Thee, My God and My Lord
I want none but Thee”! I earnestly entreat 

Be with me, not before or behind
But by my side and all around
Enter the soundlessness of my being
Transmute my silence into sheer joy
Play on my tight strung sitar strings
And fill the eerie silence with euphonic melody

I wait here with my lamp lit and burning
Expectant and anxious in this murky gloom
Glue up the broken shards and make me whole
Grant this frail reed its unshakable strength!
Over the loud vociferation of this world      
I call your name aloud in weal and woe.

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Brian Strand Poetry Contest (1051)
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Merryman Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 3:30 PM
A powerful, heart-felt prayer! Beautiful, Valsa! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Goff Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Gorgeous work, Valsa!
George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 9:43 PM
Thanks a lot James ! I feel humbled.....
Baker Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Bless you soul words and the love and graditude you show for the Lord. The Spirit within me identifies with the Spirit within you; for they are the same Spirit known onlt as Love. Thank you for sharing this soulful poem with us. Peace and blessings upon you my friend, Bill
George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 9:42 PM
As love binds heart with heart, souls come into unison ! So delighted by your insightful words. Love and Gratitude! Stay blessed.
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 11:36 AM
this is both powerful and inspirational, Valsa! great poem on a Sunday
George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 9:39 PM
Andrea, much grateful to you dear ! Warm Regards !
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Dear Valsa, This poem is a prayer - it's deep and moving. You might be familiar with Tagore's Geetanjali poems. This poem feels like those spiritual compositions. Love and warm wishes ~ Mala
George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 9:38 PM
Tagore's Gitanjali , I love ! I assume that you are from his land. I feel honored to think that my poem has a touch of Tagore's devotional hymns . Thank you so much Malabika !
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 4:54 AM
Deeply moving words of faith and longing my friend. Your poem resonates urging for divinity's blessings. Solemn voice rings !
George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 9:32 PM
Thank you so much Vijay.... ! Thanks for your blessings !
Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 1:52 AM
"Enter the soundlessness of my being Transmute my silence into sheer joy" This is a meditation. Well done too.
George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 4:13 AM
Thanks a lot for your generous response to many of my poems, Caren ! Stay blessed, dear !
Cunningham Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 12:13 AM
Reads like a prayer Valsa, he's never far from us. Tom
George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 4:12 AM
Yes He is within and around always ! Thanks a lot Tom !
Buhagiar Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 11:05 PM
What a splendid psalm-like poem you have written, dear friend. It is like a morning prayer that fills the heart with spiritual grace. And in blank verse too. Blessings.
George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 4:11 AM
If you really feel so, I am so happy ! Only when prayers come out from the heart, they become prayers.... Thanks a lot Victor !
Wolf Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 7:35 PM
Seems to me that you have filled that 'frail reed' with a will of iron, Valsa. Beautifully penned. Light and Love, Gershon
George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 4:08 AM
However the 'frail reed' is able to stand erect with the encouraging words of friends like you ! Thank you Gershon !
Kalita Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 6:46 PM
Wish I could have written like you in the blank verse Valsa, splendid share!
George Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 4:05 AM
When I read your poems, I feel if I could write like you ! Thanks a lot Silpika~~
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