Come Share My Night

Come share my night for it is you
that ignites my soul, let not a ray
of Sun impede the covered windows
there

For it is the darkness I have learned
to love, only the stars and the Moon
may enter here

Leaving the many shadowed silhouettes
dancing on the walls like so many embers
flying upward as if they were fingers grasping
ever higher with there own hidden purpose

Everything seems perfect now somehow
the imperfections of the day are lost
in the deep dark coolness of the night 

Crying can be heard but not seen
Portraits are there but only traces
may be noticed

Even the crystal prisms colorless
by day take on an array of amber
hues as the evening breeze brushes
against them

The fireplace mirrored in the crystals
explode with vibrant color that reaches
out from the darkness with welcomed
emotion

Here in this darkened velvet place
I am young again, there is no sadness
written on my face

What was is now gone and I become
a part of the ritual of the night bathed
only in star light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/26/2012 5:17:00 PM
yes well done Sharon, bathed only in starlight...:)
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Date: 1/26/2012 3:24:00 PM
Excellent poem Sharon, colorful and filled with emotion.....wonderful luck in the contest....with love...old Jack
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Date: 8/4/2011 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Sharon. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Sharon. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2011 6:33:00 PM
Congrats Sharon my friend on your featured poem this week on PS .. miss my friend..hope u are doing well .. a wonderful piece to share with luv.. keep in touch please...luv..
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:42:00 PM
Wow!!! So many layers yet so seamlessly sewn. I am glad I read your poem today. I hope to write like this someday.
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Date: 12/3/2010 11:32:00 AM
One of the best poems I have read on the Soup for quite a while Sharon. You've raised the bar ever so much with this GEM....:)
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Date: 12/3/2010 4:08:00 AM
Very expressive and descriptive work..The second stanza seems to set the tone..Thanks for stopping by my work and commenting..Sara
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Date: 12/2/2010 11:39:00 PM
Perfect piece for a perfect night. Keep writing my dear... I love your poetry. you depict vividly what you intend to relay to your audience... More grease to your elbow
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Date: 12/2/2010 9:29:00 AM
Yes,Ishared it ,Sharon.It is very powerful and expressive.
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Date: 12/2/2010 9:27:00 AM
Yes,Ishared it ,Sharon.It is very powerful and expressive.
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:35:00 PM
love this excellet profound poem, Sharon Harry
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:31:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Welcome as a premiun member...Sara
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Date: 12/1/2010 4:27:00 PM
This is beautiful!
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Date: 12/1/2010 2:03:00 PM
Sharon this by far one of the best I have read in a long time...wow im speechless love Michael
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Date: 12/1/2010 1:32:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, Sharon. I'm sorry you've experienced this loss too. But as for the lighting, stepping back a few more inches from the mirror each year helps too! LOL
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Date: 12/1/2010 12:18:00 PM
"Crying can be heard but not seen," such a powerful statement about people who choose to live in the shadows of darkness. Truly a moving poem. If you don't mind a bit of humor, I look younger too when I change the lightbulbs and replace them with lower wattage. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/1/2010 11:53:00 AM
Good poem. Check out mine if you get the chance.
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Date: 12/1/2010 8:00:00 AM
I enjoyed the last two triplets the most, Sharon
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:49:00 AM
We are having our first laying snowfall this morning in Springfield,Ohio. December 1,2010 what a way to enter this month. It is absolutely beautiful and finds me in good spirits. I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Shar as usual. Looking forward to reading more. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:12:00 AM
Wow Sharon, I really enjoyed this from start to finish.. I love the lines "I am young again, there is no sadness written on my face" beautiful.. Enjoy your day, love Wilma
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:54:00 AM
Welcome to Premium Membership Sharon..so good to have u on board ... and enjoying extra features luv..
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Date: 11/30/2010 7:57:00 PM
Hello, Sharon i love the entrance of the passion here. The trace of the dance is awesome.. Brilliant and full of glow,..p.d.
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Date: 11/30/2010 7:55:00 PM
thankxxx Sharon ...we certainly appreciate your prayers and lovely comments on my poetry tonight which my hubby has inspired the words.. appreciate with luv..
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Date: 11/30/2010 4:57:00 PM
An intense and lovely write Sharon .. very intimate and intricate are your lines .. very emotional and passionate as well.. luv this free verse from your creative pen tonight my friend with luv..
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