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Come Play

Don’t waste the day
  come what may
Go out to play
  beneath a ray
Keep thoughts of gray
  far at bay



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

September 5, 2019 at 10:51 PM

Do not stay, get out there, be gay and play, and I mean today! Monorhymes are tough. Nice one, Line!

Line Gauthier

September 6, 2019 at 8:51 AM

Absolutely, Caren.

Timothy Mcguire

September 5, 2019 at 9:59 PM

For this poem I say HOORAY!

Line Gauthier

September 6, 2019 at 8:51 AM

Thanks, Timothy, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Beautiful Scars

September 5, 2019 at 10:26 AM

darn, those thoughts of gray can ruin your day... great poem lovely Line :)-luloo

Line Gauthier

September 5, 2019 at 11:59 AM

Thanks, Lu Loo, for your lovely visit and comment.

Sandra Adams

September 5, 2019 at 9:37 AM

love the advice, i try and make the most of everyday...beautifully penned :)

Line Gauthier

September 5, 2019 at 12:00 PM

That's the way to do it, Sandra. Thanks for your visit.

Chris Green

September 5, 2019 at 7:27 AM

This is how every day should be. :) Nicely done.

Line Gauthier

September 5, 2019 at 8:43 AM

Thanks, Chris. Much appreciated.

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