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Come O Rain Come

Come O rain come, throw your showers 
On this part of earth and do not run
All the simple inhabitants of our villages, towns and cities
Are waiting for you with tears in their eyes
Come O rain come, throw your showers sublime
On fields, soil, animals, trees and birds flying

Even the trees and birds, animals and herds, Human and insects
All are gloomy and sad,  with rankles on foreheads
With worries on their faces, as their hopes are getting buried
Without a shower to wipe their rolling tears from eyes
Come O rain come, throw your showers 
On this part of earth and do not run

I know, why you are offended and not listening our prayer
But the animals and birds, our simple villagers, animal herds 
Even fields drying up in excessive heat do not know 
Why you are offended and not listening their prayers
Oh pardon them as they do not know 
The misdeeds of those, who are spreading cities 
And are cutting trees, forest and are eliminating fields
In the name of modern living 
They go on spreading cities after cities 
And industries after industries
These less blessed species of humans, do not want to know 
The priceless value of mother earth
And the value of each drop of water and rain 
Which comes due to green mountains and glaciers
Trees and plants, fields and ponds, 
Lakes and rivers, they all are the
Darling children of the God of Rains.

To appease you O God of Rains
We are making our prayers with folded hands
You are and you were always our dearest
O God of Rains, on you we have offered our prayers
And have offered since ages our songs and lyrics 
And even our heart and souls
Come O rain come, throw your showers 
On this part of earth and do not run
The soil of earth and air also is boiling with heat
The birds and animals and all living creatures
Are waiting with their tired eyes on sky
To search a piece of clouds, which can extinguish their fire
With showers on their fields, plants and trees
Bless them O God of Rains, with your sublime drops of rains

Ravindra

Written on 24th June 09 originally in Hindi as a prayer Song
When draught like conditions were seen in a part of my state.
Translated in English with changes and some additions on 5th Dec.09 
Incidentally God heard the prayer of someone and
From June end onwards God of Rains blessed us with good Rains. 
Kanpur India 5th December 2009

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2012 6:35:00 AM
congrats on feature and nice poem...Patrick
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Date: 4/24/2012 7:21:00 PM
Congrats Ravindra on your poem being featured. Drought is a terrible hardship. God bless.
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Date: 4/9/2011 12:30:00 PM
wow, what a prayer for the rain god! I am happy to learn that God heard that prayer on Dec 5 of 2009. Had it been very dry for a long time? This is the way we should all pray, with much enthusiasm for something we dearly desire!
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Date: 1/19/2010 9:19:00 PM
Its raining outside as I write this, beautiful prayer.
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Date: 12/7/2009 11:47:00 AM
Very sensitive pray, interesting approach of the rain need. Sometimes the people who have `rain... shower` and other God blessed things do not appreciate them enough and destroy... The understanding of the nature, the animals and all earth beings is original. Wonderful expression of noble feelings! Florentina
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Date: 12/7/2009 10:56:00 AM
Interesting write. The misuse of our earth is a sad plight of the age in which we live. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/6/2009 12:30:00 AM
This poem has a unique flavor to it, Ravindra. The reader feels compassion for those who suffer through the drought but also a strong sense of faith that God will bless them with "sublime drops of rains." A beautiful prayer song that translates well into English. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/5/2009 7:34:00 AM
Beautiful flowing words in this creative poetry today... very visual and expressive... enjoyed reading.. and thankxxx for your wonderful comments on my poetry also.. much appreciated ... blessings... luv.... Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
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Date: 12/5/2009 5:26:00 AM
Your poem is like the pitter patter of rain, I know your magical words will open eyes and the heavens! another lovely peace! love Simone
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Date: 12/5/2009 4:42:00 AM
Wow! A wonderful and imaginative write.
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